The First Five Pages Workshop is here to help writers find their manuscript's best possible opening with the help of two of our permanent author mentors and a featured guest author. The Workshop runs over the course of three consecutive weeks. In the final week, a literary agent will review the pitch and final draft of the pages. Not only will the agent provide notes, they will also offer a partial request and critique for at least one selected winner.
And that's not all! The workshop is not just for the writers who have submitted manuscripts. For any writer, seeing how each manuscript evolves with the help of our mentoring authors and literary agent can be an unparalleled learning experience in how publishing really works and how professionals and readers read.
Once our participants are selected, the links below will be updated throughout the workshop to let you read the comments and see the transformation on each of the workshop manuscripts: what worked, what didn't work, and why. This page will always have the most recent workshop displayed with additional workshops linked below. Follow along with the workshop! Additional workshops are also available in chronological order on the site sidebar.
Guest Mentors
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Workshop Entries
Painted Scars by Dawn Elize
Genre: Young Adult Contemporary
Mentors: Kelley Armstrong, Christina June, and Stasia Kehoe
Original Submission with Comments
First Revision with Comments
Final Revision with Comments
Agent's Comments
Fearless by Britney Shae
Genre: Young Adult Contemporary
Mentors: Kelley Armstrong, Shannon Parker, and Heather Petty
Original Submission with Comments
First Revision with Comments
Final Revision with Comments
Agent's Comments
Of Wings by Rochele Smit
Genre: Young Adult Fantasy
Mentors: Kelley Armstrong, Heather Cashman, and Beth Turley
Original Submission with Comments
First Revision with Comments
Final Revision with Comments
Agent Comments
Dreams of Flying by Michelle Walsh
Genre: Middle Grade Realistic
Mentors: Kelley Armstrong, Rob Vlock, and Kimberley Griffiths Little
Original Submission with Comments
First Revision with Comments
Final Revision with Comments
Agent Comments
Extrasensory by Larysia Woropay
Genre: Young Adult Paranormal
Mentors: Kelley Armstrong, Erin Cashman, and Ron Smith
Original Submission with Comments
First Revision with Comments
Final Revision with Comments
Agent's Comments
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