Thursday, August 29, 2013

Announcing the September 1st Five Pages Workshop with Mentor Leila Rasheed

The September First Five Pages Workshop will open for submissions next Saturday 9/7 at noon Eastern time. Check out the rules and get your submissions ready!



About Our Mentor

Leila Rasheed's first book was called Chips, Beans and Limousines. It was a Red House Read of the Year in 2009, and was shortlisted for the Wigan Explore Book award. There are two sequels. She's currently working on a new book and writing publisher-led fiction for Working Partners and Disney Hyperion (USA). Her series for Working Partners is called The Witch of Turlingham Academy and is published under the name Ellie Boswell. Her series for Disney Hyperion is called At Somerton and is published under my own name.

Aside from her experience as a published author, she has an MA in Children’s Literature (Roehampton) and an MA with distinction in Writing (Warwick). Recently she developed and taught a highly successful module in Writing for Children and Young People at the University of Warwick. She was previously a children’s bookseller for five years. She is a member of NAWE, IBBY and the SCBWI.

She also leads creative writing workshops, critiques manuscripts (only fiction for children and teenagers) and mentors people who are writing for children or teenagers. This autumn she’ll be running a 10 week course of workshops in Writing for Children and Teenagers in Moseley, Birmingham.

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Monday, August 19, 2013

1st 5 Pages August Workshop - Moss Rev 2


Michele McCole Moss
Middle Grade Fantasy
The End


Brynn carefully excavated a small space, just big enough for her long lean body amid all her favorite books. She fit perfectly between them. It was her nest. Every night they crowded around her, comforting words, old friends. But, her nest was sagging.

“You don’t need every book in bed with you,” her father said.

“Every book,” Brynn cried. “This is hardly every book.”

Brynn bounded from her bed, the titles falling inward in an avalanche of words, tumbling into the crevice she made for herself. Colorful dust jackets leapt from their hardcovers as feather-soft pages splayed open as if taking flight.

Her father, Thomas, watched them fall and breathed a deep, heavy sigh.

Brynn stomped out of her room, past her father, then ran down the steps to the living room. She stood peering at the piles of books and papers that covered every surface. An ancient TV, almost waist high, stood in the room’s center, its screen absent, its guts replaced with books. More titles stood three deep on the bookshelves lining the walls. This was the danger of living with a professor of folklore—clutter.

She threw her hands up in the air and looked over her shoulder to catch her father’s eye, but he was still upstairs. Her hands curled into frustrated fists and she let out a little growl. She made her way back to her room, each pounding footstep screaming out her disbelief.

“There’s nowhere else to put them,” she said. Her foot tapping the floor.

“I’ll find a place,” he promised.

Her mouth hung open and her brow crinkled. Her father looked back at her, his expression a picture of calm unending patience. Brynn shook her head and rearranged her face, her eyes widening in hope.

“Please? Can’t I just keep some of them with me?” she asked.

Thomas shook his head and Brynn’s face fell.

“I don’t care if you pile them outside your door, but they can’t be inside your room anymore. The temptation is too much,” he said.

“But all of yours are lining the hall,” she said.

He was actually going to make good on his threat. How could she make him understand?

“Every other father in the world would be happy if his daughter read I do,” she said.

“Every other father in the world doesn’t travel by motorcycle with his daughter holding on behind him. Every other father doesn’t have to worry about his exhausted child falling asleep while on said motorcycle.”

His eyes challenged her to disagree.

“I know, but,” Brynn began.

Thomas cut her off.

“I doubt most parents have to worry their children are lost in Svalbard, Rohan or Hogwarts when they should be sleeping. You are too tired too often.”

“I,” she began.

“My beautiful bookworm, this is not a punishment. You’re a growing girl. While I’m very happy you read just as much as your dear old dad, you cannot keep doing this. We’ll find a perfectly reasonable spot. I just need to know you won’t stay up all night with them anymore.”

He stepped into her room and plucked out a little toy dog from the pile of books.

“You can still have him,” Thomas said, holding the stuffed animal out to her and giving him a little jiggle. One of the dog’s button eyes dangled precariously from an inch-long blue thread, completely different from the white stitching of the original seams. Brynn reached and took the dog, her face screwed up, scrutinizing the old wound. Her fingers grasped the loose thread and pulled. The button fell to the floor. She gasped. She dropped down, her hand reaching under her bed for the lost eye.

“His name is Tock,” she said.

“I guess I didn’t do the best job on his eye, but his ears are still on,” her father said. The same blue thread mapped out other repairs.

Her fingers closed around her dog’s button eye. As she pulled herself up from beneath the bed her shoulder hit the frame and His Dark Materials Omnibus dropped down smacking her smartly on the head. Her shoulders sagged and she looked to see if her father had noticed.

He pointed to her bed in a gesture that said “get started.”

Her father left her room. She could hear him doing something in the hall, but she didn’t want to see.

“It won’t even feel like my bed anymore. I won’t be able to sleep,” she called.

If she had nightmares, or couldn’t sleep, they were all right there, ready to rescue her, but he was taking them from her.

Thomas poked his head into Brynn’s room.

“C’mon, it’s not such a big deal. You can put them on the attic staircase. I pulled it down for you. I never realized it, but it’s like a bookcase waiting to be used. We’ll just leave it down from now on. I never really use it until I have to get Christmas decorations anyway,” he said.

Silence.

“When you want to read in your room, you can take a book from it and then replace it before it’s time for lights out,” he said.

Brynn answered with an audible sniff. Thomas waited.

“I’m 11-years-old. Don’t you think I’m too old for rules like this? You’re always telling me how mature I am,” she reminded him.

He leaned down and kissed her head.

“Yes, you’re getting very grown up, but evidently not grown up enough to gage when it is time to sleep,” he said.
Her hands smoothed pages, stroked spines and danced along gold letters.

“I’m going to run out to get us some food. Our supplies are dire,” her father said dramatically, trying to make her giggle. When no giggle was forthcoming, he continued, “The only place open is the Stop-N-Shop, so I’ll be awhile. It’ll give you time to clear out your room.”

“Can’t I go with you?” she asked, a note of panic in her voice.

“No, sweetheart, stay here and finish up with your room. You’ll be fine,” he told her.

“What if something happens to you and I’m not there?” she asked.

“What is going to happen to me sweetheart? You’re stalling. Now get to it,” he said.

“I’m not, I promise. I don’t like to be alone. What if the same thing that happened to them happens to you?” she asked.

Thomas squeezed his eyes shut. “That’s different.”

Like every other time she tried to ask about her mother and sister, without really asking, her father shut down. She had pushed the button. His whole body tensed. His eyes remained closed as hers burrowed into him. Thomas turned his head up to the ceiling, but Brynn watched a single tear escape and trail down his face. Without looking at her, he turned and left.

Brynn listened as his footsteps grew more distant. A moment later his motorcycle started up. Her heart raced. Panicked, she scrambled up from her spot and threw her window open.

“I love you. Be careful. Please,” she yelled after him, but he was already riding down the dirt road unable to hear her over the din of the motorcycle.

When you have one person in the world, you want to keep them. He didn’t know that she constantly worried about him leaving and never coming back. She stood in the window, the darkening twilight swallowing the motorcycle’s lights as it progressed down the dirt road, away from her.




1st 5 Pages August Workshop - Hill Rev 2

Name: Jen Hill

Genre: Middle Grade Fiction (Ghost Story)

Title: Secrets Of The Upside-Down Treehouse

CHAPTER 1
A girl wearing a striped tie and a very un-sixth-grader-ish hairdo sat alone on the stage. Her head buzzed with the vocabulary words she had been mastering over the past year. B. Lee Banks had a special Spelling Bee Day deal with the janitor of the Palindrome Academy for Learning Arts: she brought him coffee, he let her in before the bell rang. She was lucky that he'd agreed to the arrangement, because being first was very important to her.

Just a few more precious moments, she thought to herself between words. Winning this spelling bee was crucial to her continued success at Palindrome Academy. She had a perfect academic record and was an all-time spelling bee champion. Neither of these things made her very popular with her classmates, but the exchange was one she could live with.
The bell rang, and any minute now the other students would start to arrive. She fished a filigreed barrette out of her canvas tote bag and held it tight. She knew good luck charms were ridiculous, but today she made an exception. The barrette was a family heirloom, passed down on her mother’s side. It wasn’t for wearing: the barrette was far too fancy for her taste and, besides, it wouldn’t work with her hairstyle. The bun she wore every day made B. Lee feel like a shrewd business woman. It was a serious hairdo. It was also the opposite of cool, but B. Lee wasn’t destined for being cool. She was destined for a greater purpose.

As the footsteps of her competitors filled her ears she retreated into a peaceful inner world. Closing her eyes, she entered into an imaginary conversation with Christopher Palindrome, the boy for whom the school was named over one hundred years ago. He congratulated her in that old-timey voice she imagined him to have, and gave her a friendly punch in the arm. “Catching up to me, I see,” he said playfully. B. Lee smiled. “One more win and we’re tied,” she said with a wink.

The sound of giggles and the smell of bubblegum jarred B. Lee out of her fantasy. She didn’t need to turn around to know that Ramona Romano and Dot Diddy had seated themselves behind her. She clutched the barrette tighter and bent her head down, hoping they would ignore her for a change. Of course this was folly, and she knew it.

“Are you looking forward to the trophy you’re going to add to your trophy shelf?” teased Ramona. Dot giggled.

B. Lee folded her arms over her chest and craned her neck ever so slightly to the side “Can you please not antagonize me for a change?” returned B. Lee in a tone she hoped would convey attitude while hiding her insecurity.

“Antagonize? Seriously B.Lee, why do you always have to show off with your fancy words? Jeez.” Behind B. Lee’s back Ramona rolled her hazel eyes so high they seemed to skim her thick black bangs. Dot giggled again.

The surrounding seats had begun to fill up and B. Lee hoped Ramona would find another person to bother, but Ramona was having too much fun. “Did you play ‘coffee shop’ this morning?” she pressed. The laces on her sparkly sneakers were making a "tap tap tap" sound as she swung her feet under her chair, and it annoyed B. Lee.

“I didn’t ‘play’ coffee shop– I run a coffee shop. And yes, it was very busy this morning, thank you,” said B. Lee, turning around this time to deliver an intimidating look into her adversary’s eye. For a bold moment she held her gaze, then turned back around to face front. Why was it so hard for people to understand that she had a side business? No one ever questioned little kids having lemonade stands. And duh, lemons cost so much more than coffee. Lemonade stands don’t earn money, they’re just cute. And B. Lee was interested in making money. Adults drink coffee like fiends, which was why the coffee stand she set up in front of her house each morning was such a success. It was genius, she thought.

But that reminded her: she’d skipped her usual trip to the bank to deposit the sales money because it was more important to be the first one at school than to risk not getting her favorite seat. She clutched her bag nervously, and snuck a peek in to make sure the money was still there. Of course it was. Phew. The idea of carrying around so much money made her edgy; she’d have to get to the bank right after school.

“Got a cheat sheet in there for me?” smirked Ramona, placing her head just above B.Lee’s left shoulder. B. Lee scrunched the bag to her lap. “None of your business,” she warned with a sideward glance. “Seriously, Ramona, can you please just stop?” She let go an exasperated sigh. Why couldn’t she just ignore her, like everyone else did?

“Fine,” Ramona sat back, faking a bored yawn. “Well, have fun being valedictorian or whatever. The rest of us normal people will be doing fun things, like doing our nails and having parties. You ever been to a party, B. Lee?” Dot giggled on cue.

B. Lee dug her short, unpolished nails into her black pants and hung her head, her face beginning to burn. Ramona really knew how to push her buttons. B. Lee had zero interest in parties, but that was the lie she started telling herself when she realized she was the kid no one ever invited. Which was one of the reasons why her sole purpose in life was to be the best student ever– better, even, than the legendary Christopher Palindrome.

Seats shuffled and microphones were checked, and B. Lee heard Ramona talking now to Fred Dish. Good, she thought, relieved that Ramona had finally tired of pestering her. She scanned the room. There were others she needed to watch out for, and knowing where they sat was very important. She didn’t like surprises.

Chief among them was the new girl, Maud Brindlebee, whose tall tales really irritated B. Lee. She also dressed oddly and got terrible grades. Worst of all, she dragged a tin can around on a string. Why? “It’s my pet,” she’d explain in her weird baby voice. Weird. And she wore her hair in funny curls: what did they call those– ringlets? B. Lee thought Maud looked just like a girl from an old black-and-white movie singing about lollipops she’d seen on the internet once. Above all, Maud was distracting. How many times had B. Lee lost her train of thought on account of Maud’s humming, whistling, or foot-tapping? Countless.

But the yellow-haired girl was nowhere to be seen. Maybe she wouldn’t show up. The thought eased the tension in B. Lee’s jaw. She relaxed into her chair.

A lanky man took the stage. “Attention students!” boomed the merry voice of Principal Grimaldi. “Welcome to the hundred-and-sixteenth annual Palindrome Academy Spelling Bee!” The audience cheered.

“Let us give a warm round of applause for all the brave students who have chosen to compete this year. Competitors, please stand and take a bow.” Principal Grimaldi turned to the children on the stage, offering them a mustachioed smile as they bowed for their audience. He then took his place at the podium at the side of the stage.

First up was Isobel Antler, who misspelled the word “crumb”.
One after another approached the mic, some sighing with relief after a correct spelling; some crumpling with defeat. Her name was called, and, hoping for a really difficult word with which to dazzle everyone, B. Lee approached the microphone.

“Please spell the word ‘fidget’, as in, ‘Please do not fidget in your seat.’”
Not as challenging as she'd have liked, but it was only the beginning.
“Fidget,” she began confidently, “F-I-...”

But before she could continue a clanging sound came from the back of the auditorium.

Everyone turned to see a disheveled girl who was dragging a tin can on a string. The black beret she wore over her curly hair gave her the air of a mime or old-fashioned artist. People snickered at the sight of her.

Ugh, thought B. Lee, she pursing her lips in outrage. Of all times to interrupt, Maud Brindlebee had to choose the exact moment when B. Lee was about to shine in front of the entire school. Typical!

“Miss Banks,” prompted the principal, “please finish spelling the word ‘Fidget.’ ”

B. Lee began to sweat. She could not remember where she had stopped. Did she get to d yet? Yes, she must have- that was always where everyone else messed up. She tried to relax and continue where she had left off, for starting over would disqualify her.

“...G-E-T. Fidget.” She smiled at the principal, flouncing off to her seat.

“I’m sorry, that is incorrect. Please take a seat in the audience.”

WHAT?

No, no this could not be, there must be some mistake. How could she have been wrong? She knew that word inside and out! What had she missed? Oh, NO! Horror washed over B. Lee in a cruel wave as she realized she had indeed forgotten the ‘D’. Then the magnitude of this error truly hit her.

Her perfect record was ruined. Not just this year’s, but forever. The title of all-time Spelling Bee Champion was no longer hers. All because of Maud Brindlebee and her disruptive entrance. Humiliation, rage, and contempt screamed in B. Lee’s brain.

Mrs. Toole, her teacher, met her with a sympathetic smile. "I'm so sorry my dear," she crooned, and led her to a seat in the audience. She was dazed, she was numb. How could she be expected to sit and watch someone win the victory which should have been hers? B. Lee banks did not lose– EVER. She could feel everyone staring at her. Their whispers were a swarm of mosquitos around B. Lee’s ears. This couldn’t be happening. The ache in her heart rose up through her eyes, and B. Lee struggled with all her might to keep herself from sobbing audibly.

The blur of her tears momentarily saved her from one final insult. Blinking them away, she almost screamed when she saw that she'd been seated behind the frizzy head of Maud Brindlebee.

“You and your horrible can!” she hissed at Maud through sobs.
“His name is Poppy,” corrected Maud.



1st 5 Pages August Workshop - Mell Rev 2


Name: Mckenzie Mell
Genre: Young Adult Fantasy
Title: The Civilization of Light and Dark

Skylar shielded her eyes from the sun’s glare as she tried to find her grandfather amidst the busy bodies. According to her watch, she’d been standing at the Nairobi Airport Terminal for about twenty minutes.

Someone waved at her, but she wasn’t sure it was him. The glare from the Kenyan sun became an obstacle. When it cleared, she saw a smile she couldn’t dismiss. It was Alan Edoje, her grandfather. She walked to him, noticing he wore a T-shirt with the family-owned lodge logo. Definitely him and not some creepy stranger smiling at her, she thought.

“Skylar, my dear, how are you,” he squeezed her shoulders when she reached him. She hated when people squeezed her, but she forced a smile, “I am great.”

“You finally came home.”
"Yep," she pursed her lips, dropping her eyes.


Grandpa Alan didn’t say much to her on the ride. She was fine with it, since she didn’t know what to say to him at all, really. She didn’t know him that well, because she hadn’t been to Kenya since she was six years old. She had little contact with her father’s family throughout the nearly twelve years since she left. Skylar kept her eyes on the view of the landscape. Africa. Bits of blue sparkle caught her eyes. Lake Naivasha. Tips of the Mount Longonot could be seen when she titled her eyes upward, out the window. On either side of the road, few animals could be seen grazing. Skylar bit her lips, gathering her breath; her summer would be brilliant.


“Here we are,” Grandpa Alan announced.


The one-story house was across the yard from the two-story family owned lodge. Cleanly painted Luo and other African tribal designs covered the walls. A mock thatched roof completed its African look. It stood alone, except for the plain white, brick house, and a small barn lingering at the edge of the bush land. Grandpa Alan let her know she’d share boarding with her father, Ishmael, and his new wife, whom she had yet to meet.

“Aren’t we going to tour the place a little?” She asked, when she saw Grandpa Alan getting ready to leave.


Grandpa Alan checked his watch, “Too late now. Another day. I have some errands to run first.”

“Alright,” she nodded, a little disappointed.

He smiled. “We’ll spend plenty of time together later.”

She nodded, trying not to read much into his words, even if she didn’t quite trust the smile on his thin lips. In the small, tidy bedroom, she moved toward the window, admiring the view of the plains. She was excited about Kenya. Her main reason for coming to Kenya was adventure, and she intended to get into it right away.

In Toronto, she and her mother, Lorraine Labelle, lived in a small, two-bedroom apartment, away from nature. She had never been outside the city, and when she got the invite from Ishmael and Grandpa Alan, she really jumped on the chance to leave. Now that she was in Kenya, she planned to make the most of her trip, exploring the country and culture of her father.

After a few minutes of looking around, she found a phone in the sitting room and dialed her mother’s number. Lorraine sounded relieved to hear her voice. “How come it took you so long to call? Ishmael didn’t pick up you up on time, did he?”



It was an accusation. Skylar bit her lip. “No, Grandpa Alan did,” she admitted.



Lorraine hissed her teeth loudly into the phone.

“He’s not still into voodoo is he?”

She rolled her eyes. “Mom, I don’t know.”
“I bet he is.”

Skylar winced.


"Don't let that man drag you into anything," Lorraine scolded her, as if she hadn’t given her plenty of warning before she got on the plane. “All he cares about is that African spirit nonsense. He has nothing better to do."

“He’s not forcing me into anything,” Skylar assured Lorraine. Her mother didn’t listen, and continued to bash Grandpa Alan. “Mom, I have to go now. Dinner is ready," she lied. "I’ll call you tomorrow.” She hung up the phone quickly, thanking her lucky stars that she’d be away from Lorraine for the rest of the summer.

Her mother met her father, Ishmael Edoje, at university and married right after graduation. After she was born, they moved to Kenya, where Ishmael’s Luo traditions clashed with her mother's free-spiritedness. Around the time she was six-years-old, the marriage crumbled, prompting her and Lorraine back to Toronto. Since, Lorraine badmouthed the continent, all of it. Because her mother didn’t want her to come to Kenya, Lorraine stepped up the badmouthing of Skylar’s father and grandfather. Ironically, it only made her want to come to Kenya even more. It was only to get away from her mother.

As soon as she began unpacking, she heard rumblings outside her door; moving toward the doorway, she spotted Ishmael in the living room. He wore a business suit. He looked slimmer than she remembered him being. Then again, for a time, she couldn’t even remember what he looked like. Skylar approached him. Should she call him Daddy or Ishmael? “Dad?”

"Skylar," he said, with little emotion. “My goodness, look at you.”

“Yeah,” she shrugged, not sure what to do next. He made a move as if to hug her. She stepped into him, almost pulling back, before the two found themselves hugging clumsily. A second passed before Ishmael's wife came into view. Short and curvy, she stared at Skylar with shy curiosity, but didn’t say hello.

"When did you get here?" Ishmael asked pulling apart, to Skylar’s relief.

"Earlier in the evening," she admitted. “I was unpacking…”

"And your grandfather didn't say to me outside just now," he spoke unbelievingly. "Look at you. You’re a young lady now."

“No, I am not,” she squirmed. She was no lady. She lacked style and grace, and much of any lady-like characteristics for that matter.

"Skylar, this is my wife, Maja," Ishmael introduced, speaking a few words to Maja in Luo. "This is my daughter, Skylar. She’s from Toronto."

“The U.S.A.”

“In Canada,” Ishmael corrected.

“Oh,” Maja said, clearly having never heard of Canada.

"It’s so nice to meet you," Maja smiled, coming to pat her on the back. "You are eighteen?" Maja asked, releasing her.

"I’ll be in about a week, yes. July nineteenth.”

Maja shrugged, not having anything else to say.

Skylar didn't know much about Maja, except that her father had married her in the past two years. Maja was pretty and nice enough. Skylar took a mental note to avoid saying much about her to Lorraine; despite what Lorraine said about Ishmael, Skylar knew her mother still cared about him. Once, when Skylar had asked her why she had married Ishmael in the first place, if she didn't like Africa or his cultural traditions, Lorraine had quietly said:

“He was different."

In later conversations, she'd say she was a naive young girl looking to connect with her African roots. Either way, Skylar always concluded that she still loved Ishmael, and would've wished for the marriage to work out.

Dinner in the small house was quiet. A few times, Ishmael pondered the whereabouts of Grandpa Alan, but didn't dwell on it. After dinner, when his wife had retired to bed, Ishmael invited her to sit with him on the veranda.



“How is your mother doing?”


"She's fine." Skylar was surprised by the questions, and for a second, waited for vitriol about Lorraine.

"Has she remarried?"

"Nope," she answered too honestly. When Skylar thought about it, she realized it was a good idea to say as little about Lorraine to Ishmael as possible. Her mother repeatedly told friends she had no time for a man. Her only husband was her job, as the managing director of an independent radio station in North York; all her free time was spent working.

Skylar and Ishmael fell quiet for some time, because like her, he didn’t seem to know what to say. He was a man of few words. She knew that, but not much else about her father. Her only vivid memory was of him sitting by a baobab tree, holding her and smiling. It was the memory stored in her most treasured photograph of them.

“Why did you want to come?” he asked, suddenly interested.


1st 5 Pages August Workshop - Catalano Rev 2


Name: Pete Catalano
Genre: Middle Grade Magical Realism
Title: UNLIMITED WISHES



My head snapped back.

Shoved from behind as I struggled to carry the over-sized box I salvaged from the computer lab’s Annual Spring Cleaning, I fell to my knees.

I watched helplessly as the spare parts flew through the air. In the second it took to hit the ground, all the painstaking work I had done sorting the smaller parts into glass jars was lost. They burst into thousands of razor-sharp shards upon impact and scattered across the sidewalk. I froze, waiting for the tinkling sound of broken glass to stop before I dared move again.

“Hey Price. Where’s my laptop?” a voice demanded.

“It’ll be done tomorrow,” I groaned. “I promised you it would be ready on Wednesday.”

“Today’s not Wednesday?” the voice asked.

“Nope,” I said, making sure nothing but the jars were broken, “it’s still Tuesday. Just like it was earlier at school when you demanded it then.”

“Well.” He looked confused. As if he were searching for something else to say other than the usual grunt my clients usually give me. “I’ll be back.”

“Looking forward to it.” I smiled and half-waved as he stomped away. “Oh yeah,” I thought, gathering up my things. “Another satisfied customer.”

I found my niche and semi-guaranteed my safety through my ability to fix anything with a motherboard. Unless you have a miracle or a magic wand, those two things are an essential combination to survive any given day in middle school.


Getting home with as many good parts as I was able to manage, I plopped down on a chair in the kitchen and spent a moment carefully pulling tiny shards of glass out of my clothes as my little brother, Max, came stumbling into the room. He was five and at that age where everything he did was in an effort to destroy me and everything I loved.

Odin, our one-hundred-and-forty pound sheepdog, followed Max closely. I was never quite sure if Odin was protecting Max from the terrors of the world or protecting the world from the terror we called Max.

“What have you been doing today?” I asked him, not really caring what his answer was, but just chattering as I looked for something to eat . . . and something to do.

“I was playing all day long,” Max chattered away, his eyes never once looking in my direction as he wrestled with Odin across the floor of the kitchen.

“Yeah, that’s great,” I said.

“Playing all day long, Max finished his sentence, “in your room.”

“Mom!” I slammed the refrigerator shut and ran up the stairs two steps at a time, stopping just short of my doorway. The light was on and the door was cracked open. I moved cautiously, knowing that I was about to step into a disaster that would produce a violent reaction, and Max wasn’t quite within my reach. I needed to give him some time to catch up.

Hearing his footsteps and the distinct sound of Odin’s jingling collar coming down the hall behind me, I gave my door a slight push, and waited breathlessly as it glided open.

At first glance things seemed fairly undisturbed, but again, this was just a quick, skimming-the-surface look, checking to see if there were any walls cracked, ceiling tiles pulled down, or any structural damage that was easily seen or dangerously unsafe.

Realizing that the damage or rather “play,” as Max called it, would be limited to something less obvious, but possibly far more terrifying, I started to look at my individual, collectible items. These were the ones that, if looked at, touched, or even breathed on, carried the standard penalty of death according to the little, pesky brother code.

There are three things I value more than anything in this world; my video game collection, my comic book collection, and my cell phone, not necessarily in that order.

My video game collection took up space on several shelves on the wall just below the console. Since they were in order by type and frequency of use, they would be quick and easy to go through to make sure that none of them were damaged or even out of place. Watch Dogs, Grand Theft Auto V, Call of Duty: Ghosts, FIFA 14, NBA 2K14, it looked like all the important ones were there. After a few moments, I knew that particular part of my collection was safe, and I moved onto the next.

My comic book collection was far more extensive and kept in plastic sheets and arranged alphabetically . . . and by value. There are two comics, in particular, Superman #14 and Spiderman #8, that are graded. Thankfully they are protected by two sheets of hard plastic and out of the hands of busy little brothers.

I looked over at Max, who had finally caught up, followed closely by Odin, of course, who in this particular case was certainly protecting Max from me.

“So do you want to tell me what you were playing with,” my fingers moved rapidly through my comic collection, “or do you just figure you and Odin can outrun me when I find out what you did?” Max shrugged as I waited for an answer, and then rolled his eyes. As I watched it turned into a shoulder shrugging, eye-rolling festival timed to the music that was playing in his head.

Max made Odin lie on the floor and then jumped back and forth over him, not paying any attention to what I was asking him. He was either not sure what I was doing or taunting me in the subtlest way I have ever been taunted.

“Mom!” I yelled out one more time, hoping to put both this hunt and my anxiety to an abrupt end.

“What is all the ruckus in here?” Mom asked as she came into my room to find me going through my comic books and Max and Odin now sitting on the floor staring up at me. “Ooooh, now isn’t that sweet,” she said. “See Luke, I told you. He just adores you.”

“He doesn’t adore me,” I protested and accidently allowed a short, brief whine to escape out of sheer frustration. It was a sound coming from me that was very familiar from my own Max-like days, but something I hoped would never escape from my throat again.

As the embarrassment disappeared I started to explain. “Max said he was playing in my room and I thought if I could find whatever he did, whatever he touched, whatever he even looked at for too long, I would be able to fix it or even reverse it. But he’s not talking. He’s just sitting there mocking me, Mom, and he’s even pulled Odin into his little mind game as well.” She looked at both of them and then looked back at me. “I think we may need to get a little physical with him.” In my mind I could imagine strapping Max and Odin into a chair and shining a bright white light on them until they talked. Cutting off food, water, and potty breaks until . . .

“Max?” my mother asked him . . . just one time.

Max stood up, Odin nearly in his back pocket, and walked to my closet. He opened the door, and reached into the farthest corner away from the doors. He returned just as quickly, and as he opened his hands, he showed me several small pieces of metal, a few screws . . . and a cell phone battery.

“Oh, Max,” my mother said disapprovingly.

“I might as well be dead,” I cried, looking at the several random pieces that lay in his hands. Usually if there is a problem with my phone, I would just pull it apart, fix it, and then put it all back together again. But with this . . .

“My social life, however limited it may have been, is now over,” I said, the whine returning quickly. “I must have had a thousand names in that contact list . . . ”

“Luke . . . ” my mother said.

“I must have had a hundred names in that contact list.”

“Luke . . . ”

“I had a good ten names in that contact list, and now I have to tell every one of them why I need that information . . . again,” I took a deep breath before I continued. “I have to get a new phone.”

My mother looked at Max, who smiled sweetly and then stuck his tongue out at me before taking Odin and leaving my room for their next great adventure.

“I’m so sorry, Luke,” my mom said. “Sometimes he gets out of my sight and . . . ”

“And then we have to clean up and forgive.” I smiled at her. “It’s okay, Mom. It’s what happens when Satan’s spawn comes for what was supposed to be a short visit and then decides to stay, tormenting me for something horrible I am sure I must have done in a previous life. At least we have Odin watching after him now. There may not be less for him to get into, but at least we can see or hear Odin when he’s getting into it with him. Not the brightest, certainly the clumsiest, but also the most lovable.”

“You’re talking about Odin now, aren’t you?” Mom said, laughing. “I’ll talk to your father about your phone. We had been thinking about getting you something a little smarter and a lot more up-to-date.”

“Much like I was hoping for with Max,” I said, smiling.

1st 5 Pages August Workshop - Mayberry Rev 2


Name: Martha Mayberry
Genre: Young Adult Science Fiction/Romance
Title: Gone Wild
Revision 2

Limestone Air Force Base, Maine


I squinted past the thin clusters of trees, with their withered branches and curled leaves, to the ships perched like raptors on the runway. Demeter and Hestia loomed in the distance, their hulls a dark, ominous gray in the muted sunlight.

Within an hour, my brother Joe and I would sleep inside Demeter, our goddess of the skies, cruising across the galaxy to a planet called Stellar 3.

I pictured us pinned inside our cramped little pods, lids locked tight, puffs of gas swirling around our faces, medication searing through our veins until our will to resist dulled and faded away. Blast chillers kicking in, morphing us into space-icles.

I was doomed.

“You have your pack?” Auntie Minerva asked.

My lips stretched in a grimace. Gesturing to the bags at my feet, I peeked at my watch. 11:20. Forty minutes until they call my name. I could swear my feet were crystallizing on the grate.

“I wish you didn’t have to go,” she said. Skin puckered around her lips in white creases and tiny, clear pearls of sweat rested on her upper lip. “If you stayed, I’d find a way to take care of you,” she said.

Joe tugged her shirt. “I can take care of myself.”

She gave him a long look and her lips tightened as she held back a grin.

“I can take care of myself. I’m almost nine. A man.” He puffed his chest, looking anything but manly to me. He was lean and small for his age. Shortness ran in our family but I hoped he’d grow tall in our new world. Like a transplanted tree. His thick auburn hair was askew and his brown eyes were fierce. Maybe a thorn tree. . .

“What’s this?” Auntie reached inside his shirt and plucked a mouse out by the tail. Maurice squeaked as he joined the jumbled contents of her purse. “I told you I’d take care of your pets.”

“Please, can’t I take a little one?” he pleaded and his bravery slid. I recognized the little brother who’d crawled into my bed every night since our parents had left.

“No.” She smoothed his hair, her hands lingering on the nape of his neck. “No pets allowed in stasis. I’ll sure miss having you around, little man.”

“Joe, that makes no sense,” I said. “Why would anyone bring a mouse on a star ship? It wouldn't have anything to eat.”

“It could eat you,” the little creep said. “It could gnaw on you, the whole year in space.”

“Jeez, Joe, thanks. Love you too.” So much for playing nice. Brat.

“What were your parents thinking? Abandoning their children for a dream in the stars.” Auntie worried a nail as she stared at the ships. “Chemicals and cryogenics-it’s all so dangerous.”

I bit back a wince. “We’ll be fine.” And hated the quiver in my voice. “Mom and Dad made it. Besides, I want to go. It’s an adventure.” I just had to keep telling myself that.

President Marand cleared his throat. The harsh sound blasted through the loud speakers, picking the fresh scab on my nerves. He spoke from inside a glass structure, suspended in front of us, savoring his piped-in, pristine air. A sharp contrast to the sludge the rest of us enjoyed.

“Today’s a historic day for Earth,” he said. “Our children go forth to propagate a new world!”

Ugh. Did he really just say that? Other kids on the platform around me grimaced. Please, I just turned seventeen. I’m not a brood mare.

I glanced at my watch. 11:30. The knot in my stomach expanded until my belly threatened to burst.

My legs were numb, as if I'd suddenly developed a bizarre neurological disorder. Psychosomatic. That was the word for it. Chill, Lia, it’s all in your head.

Auntie’s gaze slid from my watch to my face.

“None of that.” She shook a finger at me but her look was kind.

“It’s eleven thirty.” As if she couldn't tell the time by my expression.

A whimper slipped past her lips, a forlorn sound in the bustle that surrounded us. “It can’t be time. It’s too soon.”

I pulled her into my arms, holding her gently because she was so frail and I was still strong. We patted each other’s backs. Pats were the backbone of my family, doled out with every hug, and I needed my fill.

As we pulled apart, my eyes stung but I held back my tears. The last thing she needed was the memory of me breaking down. I plastered bravery on my face, a façade for the person she hoped I’d become.

She studied me before giving me a slow nod. “That’s my girl. I’m proud of you.” She grabbed both our hands, the pads of her fingertips digging into my palm. “I’m so proud of you both.”

Joe gave in to what I held back and buried his face in her side. She stooped down, wrapped him up and buried her face in his shoulder. Wiping my eyes, I patted their backs, soothing their pain with my hands.

I kept picturing her in her tiny kitchen, table set for one.

Auntie’s eyes were bleak, their soft brown color washed away by grief. “You’re all I have left.”

And that was the crux of the matter. She couldn’t go with us. Decaying genome and all that. And we couldn’t stay on Earth. Failing planet and all that.

Helping her stand, I gave her a long, lingering hug. She tweaked Joe’s chin, gave us a bright smile that never moved past her lips, and started down the stairs. I traced her image in my mind as she moved away, watching until she joined the other relatives in the secure area behind the gate.

My eyes flew past her, to the thousands of spectators crowded beyond the fence, faces peering through the slats. Protestors had signs hoisted above their heads with the slogans-

Everyone belongs on Earth
Don’t abandon us

Earth’s Children. At least they were locked beyond the gate. Security had been high since the onset, but groups like theirs had infiltrated our project. Once our liftoff had been delayed for weeks, and another time someone had assassinated our lead scientist.

But launch day was here. No more running past their picket lines and shrill screams to get to orientation.

President Marand paused and in the lull, everyone cheered. He continued, speaking of honor and duty, and how we were ambassadors for mankind.

11:40.

I could make it. I could. As long as I didn’t dwell on what came next, leap off the platform and shove through the crowd, screaming about turning into a space popsicle.

Scanning the platform next to ours, I studied each face waiting to board Hestia. Where in the world was he?

Catching myself nibbling a nail, I yanked my hand away.

Joe fidgeted beside me with the energy of a two-year old and I longed to wiggle along with him. I itched from smog dust and barely resisted the urge to yank my durasuit sleeve up and scratch.
After he’d stomped on my foot for the thousandth time, I finally snapped. “You’re not a baby, Joe. Pay attention. It’s almost time to board.”

He threw me a sulky look, so I grabbed his arm and held him still. Yanking away, he snarled like the little beast he was and settled onto the platform. He picked up a stick and dragged it across the grate.

Monday, August 12, 2013

1st 5 Pages August Workshop - Catalano Rev 1


Name: Pete Catalano
Genre: Middle Grade Magical Realism
Title: UNLIMITED WISHES


My head snapped back.

Hit squarely from behind, with no warning or consideration to how I struggled to carry the over-sized box I salvaged from the computer lab’s Annual Spring Cleaning, I fell to my knees.

I watched helplessly as the spare parts flew through the air. In the second it took to hit the ground, all the painstaking work I had done sorting the smaller parts into glass jars was lost. They burst into thousands of razor-sharp shards upon impact and scattered across the sidewalk. I froze, waiting for the tinkling sound of broken glass to stop before I dared move again.

“Hey Price, where’s my laptop?” a voice demanded as I kept my head down.

“It’ll be done tomorrow,” I said, touching my bruises lightly. “I promised you it would be ready on Wednesday.”

“Today’s not Wednesday?” the voice asked.

“Nope,” I said, making sure nothing but the jars were broken, “it’s still Tuesday. Just like it was earlier at school when you demanded it then.”

“Well.” He looked confused. As if he were searching for something else to say other than the usual grunt. “I’ll be back.”

“Looking forward to it.” I smiled and half-waved as he stomped away. “Oh yeah,” I thought, gathering up my things. “Another satisfied customer.”

I found my niche and guaranteed my safety through my ability to fix anything with a motherboard. Unless you have a miracle or a magic wand, those two things are an essential combination to survive any given day in middle school.


Getting home with as many good parts as I was able to manage, I plopped down on a chair in the kitchen and spent a moment carefully pulling tiny shards of glass out of my clothes as my little brother, Max, came stumbling into the room. He was five and just about at that age where it seemed as if everything he did was in an effort to destroy me and everything I loved.

Odin, our one-hundred-and-forty pound sheepdog, followed Max closely. I was never quite sure if Odin was protecting Max from the terrors of the world or protecting the world from the terror we called Max.

“What have you been doing today?” I asked him, not really caring what his answer was, but just chattering as I got up and looked for something to eat . . . and something to do.

“Playing . . . ” Max said slowly, his eyes never once looking in my direction as he wrestled with Odin across the floor of the kitchen, “ . . . in your room.”

“Mom,” I slammed the refrigerator shut and ran up the stairs to my room two steps at a time, stopping just short of the doorway. Much to my disappointment, the light was on and the door was cracked open. I moved cautiously, knowing that if I was about to step into a disaster it would produce a violent reaction, and Max wasn’t quite within my reach. I needed to give him some time to catch up.

Hearing his footsteps and the distinct sound of Odin’s jingling collar coming down the hall behind me, I gave my door a slight push, and waited breathlessly as it glided open.

At first glance things seemed fairly undisturbed, but again, this was just a quick, skimming-the-surface look, checking to see if there were any walls cracked, ceiling tiles pulled down, or any structural damage that was easily seen or dangerously unsafe.

Realizing that the damage or rather “play,” as Max called it, would be limited to something less obvious, but possibly far more terrifying, I started to look at my individual, collectible items . . . the ones that, if looked at, touched, or even breathed on, carried the naturally-standard penalty of death.

There are three things I value more than anything in this world . . . my video game collection, my comic book collection, and my cell phone.

My video game collection took up space on several shelves on the wall just below the console. Since they were in order by type and frequency of use, they would be quick and easy to go through to make sure that none of them were damaged or even out of place. Watch Dogs, Grand Theft Auto V, Call of Duty: Ghosts, FIFA 14, NBA 2K14, it looked like all the important ones were there. After a few moments, I knew that particular part of my collection was safe, and I moved onto the next.

My comic book collection was far more extensive and kept in plastic sheets and arranged alphabetically . . . and by value. They would take a little longer to go through.

There are two comics, in particular, Superman #14 and Spiderman #8, that are graded. Thankfully they were protected by two sheets of hard plastic and out of the hands of busy little brothers.

I looked over at Max, who had finally caught up, followed closely by Odin, of course, who in this particular case was certainly protecting Max from me.

“So do you want to tell me what you were playing with,” my fingers moved rapidly through my comic collection, “or do you just figure you and Odin can outrun me when I find out what you did?” I waited for an answer. “You planning on just jumping on his back and having him run for daylight?”

Max shrugged and sat on the floor next to Odin, either not sure what I was doing or taunting me in the subtlest way I have ever been taunted.

“Mom!” I yelled out one more time, hoping to put both this hunt and my anxiety to an abrupt end.

“What is all the ruckus in here?” Mom asked as she came into my room to find me going through my comic books and Max and Odin staring up at me. “Ooooh, now isn’t that sweet,” she said. “See Luke, I told you. He just adores you.”

“He doesn’t adore me,” I protested and accidently allowed a short, brief whine to escape out of sheer frustration. I stopped what I was doing, as I was taken by surprise by that long, high-pitched cry. It was a sound coming from me that was very familiar from my own Max-like days, but something that I hoped would never escape from my throat again.

Once the embarrassment was gone, I started to explain. “Max said he was playing in my room today, and I thought if I could find whatever he did, whatever he touched, whatever he even looked at for too long, I would be able to fix it or even reverse it. But he’s not talking. He’s just sitting there mocking me, Mom, and he’s even pulled Odin into his little mind game as well.” She looked at both of them and then looked back at me. “I think we may need to get a little physical with him.”

“Max?” my mother asked . . . one time.

Max stood up, Odin nearly in his back pocket, and walked to my closet, opened the door, and reached into the farthest corner away from the doors. He returned just as quickly, and as he opened his hands, he showed me several small pieces of metal, a few screws . . . and a cell phone battery.

“Oh, Max,” my mother said disapprovingly.

“I might as well be dead,” I cried, looking at the several random pieces that lay in my hands. Usually if there is an issue with my phone, I would just pull it apart, fix it, and then put it all back together again. But with this . . .

“My social life, however limited it may have been, is now over,” I said, the whine returning quickly. “I must have had a thousand names in that contact list . . . ”

“Luke . . . ” my mother said.

“I must have had a hundred names in that contact list.”

“Luke . . . ”

“I had a good ten names in that contact list, and now I have to tell every one of them why I need that information . . . again,” I took a deep breath before I continued. “I have to get a new phone.”

1st 5 Pages August Workshop - Mayberry Rev 1

Name: Martha Mayberry
Genre: Young Adult Science Fiction/Romance
Title: Gone Wild


Chapter 1
Limestone Air Force Base, Maine


Nibbling my lip, I squinted past the thin clusters of trees with withered branches and curled leaves, to the ships perched like raptors on the runway. Demeter and Hestia loomed in the distance, their hulls glinting a dark, ominous gray in the muted sunlight.

Within an hour, my brother Joe and I would sleep inside Demeter, our goddess of the skies, cruising across the galaxy to a planet called Stellar 3.

I pictured us pinned inside our snug little pods, lids locked tight. Puffs of gas swirling around our faces. Medication searing through our veins until our will to fight dulled and faded away to nothing. Becoming space icicles.

I was doomed.

“You have your pack?” Auntie Minerva asked.

My lips stretched in what felt like a grimace. Gesturing to our bags at my feet, I peeked at my watch. 11:20. Forty minutes left. I could almost feel my feet crystallizing on the grate.

“I wish you didn’t have to go,” she said, her face pinched. Skin puckered around her lips in white creases and tiny, clear pearls of sweat coated her upper lip. “If you stayed, I’d find a way to take care of you.”

Joe tugged her shirt. “I can take care of myself.”

She gave him a long look.

“I can take care of myself. I’m almost nine. A man.” He puffed his chest, looking anything but manly to me. He was lean and small for his age. Shortness ran in our family but I hoped he’d grow tall in our new world. Like a transplanted tree. His thick auburn hair was askew and his brown eyes were fierce. Maybe a thorn tree. . .

“Chemicals and cryogenics; it’s all so dangerous.” She stared at the ships, worrying a nail.

I bit back a wince. “Please. We’ll be fine.” And hated the quiver in my voice. “Mom and Dad made it without a hitch. Besides, they’re waiting for us at the colony.”

“It’s just . . . you’re all I have left.” Her shoulders slumped.

That was the crux of the matter. She couldn’t go with us. Decaying genome and all that. And we couldn’t stay on Earth. Failing planet and all that.

“What’s this?” She reached inside Joe’s shirt, plucking a mouse out by the tail. Maurice joined the jumbled contents of her purse. “I told you I’d take care of your pets.”

His expression was pained. “Can’t I take a little one?”

“Nope.” She grinned and tousled his hair. “No pets allowed in stasis. I’ll sure miss having you around, little man.”

“Joe, that’s stupid,” I said. “Why would anyone want to bring a mouse on a star ship? What would it eat?”

“You,” little snot-nose said with a gruesome smile. “It would gnaw on you, the whole year in space.”

“Jeez, Joe, thanks. Love you too.” I wanted to stick out my tongue but restrained myself. Barely. Brat.

I glanced at my watch. 11:30. My legs felt numb; as if all their strength was leaching away. Psychosomatic, that was the word for it. Right?

Chill, Lia, it’s all in your head. I shuffled in place, just in case.

President Marand’s voice blasted through the loud speakers. He spoke from inside his glass structure with its piped-in, pristine air. An obvious contrast to the sludge the rest of us enjoyed.

“Today’s a historic day for Earth,” he said in a jovial tone. “Our children go forth to propagate a new world!”

Ugh. Did he really just say that? Other kids on the platform around me grimaced. Please, I just turned seventeen. I’m not a brood mare.

11:35. The knot in my stomach expanded, filling the empty hole inside me. Could a body pop from tension?

Auntie’s sallow eyes met mine.

“None of that.” She shook a finger at me but her look was kind. A sigh slipped from her lips, a bare whisper in the bustle that surrounded us. “Is it time already?”

I nodded and pulled her into my arms, holding her gently because she was so frail and I was still strong. We patted each other’s backs. Pats were the backbone of my family, doled out with every hug.

As we pulled apart, my eyes stung but I held back my tears. I’d sobbed enough during the past week. The last thing she needed was the memory of me crumping. I pasted a brave smile on my face, a façade for the person she hoped I’d become.

She studied my face before giving me a brisk nod and starting down the stairs. As she shuffled toward the secure area near the gate, it was hard to believe she was only forty-three.

My vision blurred and I wiped my eyes surreptitiously on my durasuit sleeve so no one would see. Not that Joe would mock me. We hounded each other, but inside, we were a team.

Mostly I was afraid if I started crying, I might not stop, and the last thing I wanted was to imagine my neighbors chuckling as they watched the vids. Yup, that’s our Lia, the one blubbering in the peach durasuit.

Taking a deep, cleansing breath, I coughed, and turned to the thousands of spectators crowded beyond the fence, faces peering through the slats. Protestors had signs hoisted above their heads with the slogans-


Everyone belongs on Earth
Don’t abandon us


The presence of Earth’s Children sent shivers to my toes. At least they were locked beyond the gate. Security had been high since the onset, but groups like theirs had infiltrated our project. Once our liftoff had been delayed for weeks, and another time someone had assassinated our lead scientist.

But launch day was here. No more running past their picket lines and shrill screams to get to orientation.

President Marand paused and in the lull, everyone cheered. He continued, speaking of honor and duty, and how we were ambassadors for mankind.

I peeked at my watch. 11:40. I could make it. I could. As long as I didn’t dwell on what came next, leap off the platform and shove through the crowd, screaming about turning into a space popsicle.

With Auntie gone, I scanned the platform next to ours with greedy eyes, studying each face waiting to board Hestia. Where was he?

Catching myself nibbling a nail, I yanked my hand away. If I didn’t stop now I’d be left with nubs. Cringing, I took in the backs of my hands. Had I forgotten sunblock? My scarlet hands flew to my no doubt equally scarlet face, which was likely a perfect match to my strawberry blonde hair. With my peach durasuit, I probably resembled an overdone lobster.

Joe fidgeted with the energy of a two-year old beside me and I longed to wiggle along with him. I itched from smog dust and barely resisted the urge to yank my sleeves up and scratch.

After he’d stomped on my foot for the thousandth time, I finally snapped. “You’re not a baby, Joe. Pay attention. It’s almost time to board.”

He threw me a sulky look, so I grabbed his arm and held him still. Yanking away, he snarled like the little beast he was and settled onto the platform. He picked up a stick and dragged it across the grate.

A hand touched my back. “Lia.” The whispered voice sent tingles up my spine. I knew who it was before I turned around. Malik.

1st 5 Pages August Workshop - Moss Rev 1

Michele McCole Moss
Middle Grade Fantasy
The End

Brynn carefully excavated a small space, just big enough for her long boyish body amid all her favorite books. She fit perfectly between them. She liked to think of it as her nest. Every night they crowded around her, comforting words, old friends. But, her nest was sagging.

“You don’t need every book in bed with you,” Thomas said.

“Every book,” Brynn yelled. “Every book?”

Brynn bounded from her bed, the titles falling inward in an avalanche of words, tumbling into the crevice she had made for herself until it was full of splayed pages and colorful dust jackets leaping from their hardcovers.

Her father, Thomas, watched them tumble and breathed a deep, heavy sigh.

Brynn stomped out of her room, past her father, then pounded her feet into each step leading to the living room. She stood peering at the piles of books and papers that cluttered every surface. An ancient TV, almost waist high, stood in the room’s center, its screen absent, its guts replaced with books. More titles stood three deep on each shelf. Slimmer volumes laid horizontally on vertically arranged titles. No space remained. She threw her hands up in the air and looked over her shoulder to catch her father’s eye, but he was still upstairs. He hadn’t followed her. Her hands curled into frustrated fists and she let out a little growl. She made her way back to her room, each pounding footstep screaming out her frustration and disbelief.

“There’s nowhere else to put them,” she said. Her foot tapping the floor.

“I’ll find a place,” he said.

Her mouth hung open and her brow crinkled. Her father looked back at her, his expression a picture of calm unending patience. Brynn shook her head and rearranged her face, her eyes widening in hope.

“Please? Can’t I just keep some of them with me?” she asked.

Thomas shook his head and Brynn’s face fell.

“I don’t care if you pile them outside your door, but they can’t be inside your room anymore. The temptation is too much,” he said.

“But all of yours are outside my door lining the hall,” she yelled.

He was actually going to make good on his threat.

“You know, every other parent in the world would be happy with me. You’re being unreasonable,” she said.

“My beautiful bookworm, this is not a punishment, just a safety measure. You’re a growing girl. You need your sleep. While I’m very happy you read just as much as your dear old dad, you cannot keep doing this. We’ll find a perfectly reasonable spot. I just need to know you won’t stay up all night with them anymore,” he said.

He stepped into her room and plucked out a little stuffed dog from the pile of books.

“You can still have him,” Thomas said, holding the stuffed animal out to her and giving him a little jiggle. One of the dog’s button eyes dangled precariously from an inch-long blue thread, completely different from the white stitching of the original seams. Brynn reached and took the dog, her face screwed up, scrutinizing the old wound. Her fingers grasped the loose end of thread and pulled. The button fell to the floor. She gasped. She dropped down, her hand reaching under her bed for the lost eye.

“His name is Tock,” she said.

“I guess I didn’t do the best job on his eye, but his ears are still on,” he said. The same blue thread had reattached the dogs ears at some point.

Her fingers closed around her dog’s button eye. As she pulled herself up from beneath the bed her shoulder hit the frame and His Dark Materials Omnibus tumbled down smacking her smartly on the head. Her shoulders sagged and she looked to see if her father had noticed.

He pointed to her bed in a gesture that said “get started.”

Her father left her room. She could hear him doing something in the hall, but she didn’t want to see. She was too busy straightening the creased pages of the books that had fallen.

“It won’t even feel like my bed anymore. I won’t be able to sleep,” she called.

She knew if she had nightmares, or couldn’t sleep, that they were all right there, ready to rescue her, but he was taking them from her.

Thomas poked his head into Brynn’s room.

“C’mon, it’s not such a big deal. You can put them on the attic staircase. I pulled it down for you. I never realized it, but it’s like a bookcase waiting to be used. We can just leave it down from now on. I never really use it until I have to get Christmas decorations anyway,” he said.

Silence.

“When you want to read in your room, you can take a book from it and then replace it before it’s time for lights out,” he said.

Brynn answered with an audible sniff. Thomas waited.

“I’m 11-years-old. Don’t you think I’m too old for ridiculous rules like this? You’re always telling me how mature I am,” she reminded him.

He leaned down and kissed her head.

“Yes, you’re getting very grown up, but evidently not grown up enough to gage when it is time to sleep. You can’t stay up all night reading and sleep all day,” he said.

She continued to methodically smooth pages, stroke spines and run her fingers along gold letters.

“I’m going to run out to get us some food. Our supplies are dire,” he said dramatically, trying to make her giggle. When no giggle was forthcoming, he continued, “The only place open is the Stop-N-Shop, so I’ll be awhile. It’ll give you some time to clear out your room.”

“Can’t I go with you?” she asked, a note of panic in her voice.

“No, sweetheart, stay here and finish up with your room. I won’t be that long. You’ll be fine,” he told her.

“What if something happens to you and I’m not there?” she asked.

“What is going to happen to me sweetheart? I’ll be fine. Now get to it,” he said.

“The same thing that happened to them,” she said.

Thomas squeezed his eyes shut. “You know that’s different,” he said.

“How would I know that? You’ve never told me anything, not really,” she said.

His whole body tensed. Brynn’s eyes filled with anger. She stared at him, but his eyes remained closed. Thomas turned his head up to the ceiling, but Brynn watched a single tear escape and trail down his face. He turned without looking at her.

Brynn listened as his footsteps trailed down the stairs, through the living room and out the front door. A moment later his motorcycle started up. Her heart raced. She scrambled up from her spot in a panic. She threw open her bedroom window. Her father was about to ride away.

“Be carful, Dad. I love you. Be careful. Please,” she yelled after him, but he was already riding down the dirt road unable to hear her over the din of the motorcycle.

When you have one person in the world, you want to keep them. As long as she knew he was safe, she happily orbited around him, but never strayed far. He didn’t know that she constantly worried about him leaving and never coming back. She stood in the window watching the darkening twilight swallow up the motorcycle’s lights as it progressed down the dirt road, away from her.




1st 5 Pages August Workshop - Hill Rev 1

Name: Jen Hill

Genre: Middle Grade Fiction (Ghost Story)

Title: Secrets Of The Upside-Down Treehouse

Inside the old stone walls of the Palindrome Academy for Learning Arts sat B. Lee Banks, alone on the stage of the great auditorium. Any minute now her fellow spelling bee competitors would begin to arrive, and B. Lee knew she had just a few more minutes of solitude before the room would begin to buzz with chatter. She fished a filigreed barrette out of her leather satchel and held it tight as she reviewed the vocabulary in her head. She knew good-luck charms were for silly-hearts, but this was one superstition she allowed herself. The barrette was a family heirloom, passed down on her mother’s side, and it gave B. Lee peace of mind. She preferred not to wear it in her hair because that would break the rules of The Bun, which was her one and only hairstyle. The Bun was a tidy up-do in the manner of an old-fashioned schoolmarm. It was a serious hairdo. It was also the opposite of cool, but B. Lee wasn’t destined for being cool. She was destined for a far greater purpose.

In her head she began a conversation with Christopher Palindrome, the boy for whom the school was named over one hundred years ago. He congratulated her in that old-timey voice she imagined him to have, and gave her a friendly punch in the arm. “Catching up to me, I see,” he said playfully. B. Lee smiled. “One more win and we’re tied,” she said with a wink.

“Oh yay, a seat next to B. Lee Banks!” squealed Ramona Romano as she plopped down in the chair next to her and shook her out of the pleasant fantasy. Ramona was being sarcastic of course, because nobody really ever wanted to sit next to B.Lee. “Are you looking forward to the trophy you’re going to add to your trophy shelf?” she teased.

“As a matter of fact, yes I am. And can you please not antagonize me for a change?” B. Lee folded her arms over her chest in a defensive gesture she hoped would convey attitude.

“Antagonize? Seriously B.Lee, why do you always have to show off with your fancy words? Jeez.” Ramona rolled her hazel eyes so high they seemed to skim her thick black bangs. “I see you’ve worn your business suit today, as usual,” she continued with a smirk, and reached out to tug on the men’s tie that hung around B. Lee’s neck. “One of your dad’s?”

“Nope. These ties are from my own collection,” said B. Lee, yanking it out of Ramona’s busy hands and smoothing it down against her crisp white shirt. She tried to think of a clever put-down of Ramona’s annoying penchant for pink, but she wasn’t very good at comebacks. She just wanted to be left alone.

The surrounding seats had begun to fill up and B. Lee hoped Ramona would find another person to bother, but Ramona was having too much fun. “Did you play ‘coffee shop’ this morning?” she pressed, twirling her chin-length hair around a pink-nailed finger.

“I didn’t ‘play’ coffee shop– I run a coffee shop. And yes, it was very busy this morning, thank you,” said B. Lee defensively. Why was it so hard for people to understand that she had a side business? No one ever questioned little kids having lemonade stands. And duh, lemons cost so much more than coffee. Lemonade stands don’t earn money, they’re just cute. And B. Lee was interested in making money. Adults drink coffee like fiends, and B. Lee knew it, which was why the coffee stand she set up in front of her house each morning was such a success. It was genius, she thought. Pity the fools like Ramona who were too simple to get it.

But that reminded her: she’d skipped her usual trip to the bank to deposit the sales money because it was more important to be the first one at school than to risk not getting her favorite seat. She clutched her bag nervously, and snuck a peek in to make sure the money was still there. Of course it was. Phew. But the idea of carrying around so much money made her edgy; she’d have to get to the bank right after school.

“Whatcha got in there? A cheat sheet for me?” smirked Ramona, leaning in to get a better look. B. Lee snapped the bag closed and held it in her lap. “None of your business,” she warned. “Seriously, Ramona, can you please just stop?” Ramona was so irritating.

“Right. A perfect student like you would never cheat. Oh well. have fun being valedictorian or whatever. “

“I intend to,” said B. Lee, turning to Ramona with a confident smile.
Indeed, B. Lee Banks’ sole purpose in life was to be the best student ever– better, even, than the legendary Christopher Palindrome. A very tall order, but she knew she could do it.

Amid the shuffling of seats and checking of microphones, B. Lee concentrated on the words she had spent countless hours mastering. She scanned the room as auditorium seats filled up with the students of Palindrome Academy. Besides Ramona, she had a few peeves with certain classmates and preferred to know where they sat so she could avoid looking at them.

At the top of the list was Maud Brindlebee, who told tall tales, dressed oddly, got the worst grades and always, always seemed to be stealing attention. She was the new girl that year, having just appeared at the start of 5th grade. B. Lee couldn’t find the yellow-haired girl anywhere she looked. Probably won’t even show up, she thought dismissively.

“Attention students!” boomed the merry voice of Principal Grimaldi, whose lanky figure stood at a microphone in the center of the stage. “Welcome to the hundred-and-sixteenth annual Palindrome Academy Spelling Bee!” The audience cheered.

“Let us give a warm round of applause for all the brave students who have chosen to compete this year. Competitors, please stand and take a bow.” Principal Grimaldi turned to the children on the stage, offering them a mustachioed smile as they bowed for their audience. He then took his place at the podium at the side of stage.

First up was Isobel Antler, who misspelled the word “crumb”. This is going to be too easy, B. Lee thought with a smile on her face she couldn’t hide. One after another approached the mic, some sighing with relief after a correct spelling; some crumpling with defeat. Her name was called, and, hoping for a really difficult word with which to dazzle everyone, she approached the microphone.

“Please spell the word ‘fidget’, as in, ‘Please do not fidget in your seat.’”

Simple! Not the complicated word she'd wished for, but she’d have plenty of others later in the day.

“Fidget,” she began confidently, “F-I-...”

But before she could continue a clanging sound came from the back of the auditorium. Everyone turned to see a disheveled girl who, dragging a tin can on a string, was attempting to creep in unnoticed. The black beret she wore over her curly hair gave her the air of a mime or old-fashioned artist. People snickered at the sight of her.

Ugh, thought B. Lee, she pursing her lips in outrage. Of all times to interrupt, Maud Brindlebee had to choose the exact moment when B. Lee was about to shine in front of the entire school. Typical! Maud Brindlebee, who told tall tales, dressed oddly, got the worst grades and always, always seemed to be stealing attention. That ridiculous mop-like hairdo of hers with those silly curls: what did they call those– ringlets? B. Lee thought Maud looked just like a girl from an old black-and-white movie singing about lollipops. Her weird baby voice made the image even more believable.

“Miss Banks,” prompted the principal, “please finish spelling the word ‘Fidget.’ ”

B. Lee began to sweat. She could not remember where she had stopped. Did she get to d yet? Yes, she must have- that was always where everyone else messed up. She tried to relax and continue where she had left off, for starting over would disqualify her.

“...G-E-T. Fidget.” She smiled at the principal, flouncing off to her seat.

“I’m sorry, that is incorrect. Please take a seat in the audience.”

WHAT?

No, no this could not be, there must be some mistake. How could she have been wrong? She knew that word inside and out! What had she missed? Oh, NO! Horror washed over B. Lee in a cruel wave as she realized she had indeed forgotten the ‘D’. Then the magnitude of this error truly hit her.

Her perfect record was ruined. Not just this year’s, but forever. Thanks to this error, she would never grow up to claim a perfect academic record. All because of Maud Brindlebee and her disruptive entrance. Humiliation, rage, and contempt were having a screaming contest in B. Lee’s brain, and all three were winning.

Mrs. Toole, her teacher, met her with a sympathetic smile and led her to a seat in the audience, where she would remain for the rest of the bee. It was torture to have to watch someone win the victory which should have been hers. Not to mention hugely embarrassing. B. Lee banks did not lose– EVER. She could feel everyone staring at her. Their whispers were a swarm of mosquitos around B. Lee’s ears. This couldn’t be happening. The ache in her heart rose up through her eyes, and B. Lee struggled with all her might to keep herself from sobbing audibly.

Worst of all, she was seated just behind the frizzy head of Maud Brindlebee.

“You and your horrible can!” she hissed at Maud through tears.

“His name is Poppy,” corrected Maud.

Monday, August 5, 2013

1st 5 Pages August Workshop - Mell


Name: Mckenzie Mell
Genre: Young Adult Fantasy
Title: The Civilization of Light and Dark

Outside the Nairobi Airport Terminal, Skylar shielded her eyes from the sun’s glare as she tried to find her grandfather amidst the busy bodies. According to her watch, she’d been standing there now about twenty minutes.

Someone waved at her, but she wasn’t sure it was him. The glare from the Kenyan sun became an obstacle. When it cleared, she saw a smile she couldn’t dismiss. It was Alan Edoje, her grandfather. She walked to him, noticing he wore a T-shirt with the family-owned lodge logo. Definitely him and not a creepy stranger.

“Skylar, my dear, how are you,” he squeezed her shoulders when she reached him. She should let him know he hated when people squeezed her, but she forced a smile. “You finally came home.”

"Yep," she answered shyly.

Grandpa Alan didn’t say much to her on the ride. She was fine with it, since she didn’t know what to say to him at all, really. She didn’t know him that well, because she hadn’t been to Kenya since she was six years old and had little contact with her father’s family throughout the years.

At the one-story house, sitting across the yard from the family owned lodge, Grandpa Alan let her know she’d share boarding with her father, Ishmael, and his new wife, whom she had yet to meet.

“Aren’t we going to tour the place a little?” She asked, coolly when she saw Grandpa Alan getting ready to leave.

Grandpa Alan frowned, looking at his watch, “Too late now. Another day. I have some errands to run first.”

“Alright,” she nodded.

He watched her with a smile. “We’ll spend plenty of time together later.”

She nodded. After he left, she moved toward the small window, admiring the view if the plains from the window of her small room. She was excited about Kenya. Her main reason for coming to Kenya was adventure, and she intended to get into it right away.

In Toronto, she and her mother, Lorraine Labelle, lived in a small, two-bedroom apartment, away from nature. She had never been outside the city, and when she got the invite from Ishmael and Grandpa Alan, she really jumped on the chance to leave the city. Now that she was in Kenya, she planned to make the most of her trip, exploring the country and culture of her father.

After a few minutes of looking around, she found a phone in the sitting room and dialed her mother’s number. Lorraine sounded relieved to hear her voice. “Did Ishmael pick you up?”

“No, Grandpa Alan did,” she admitted. She could hear the cynicism in her mother’s tone.

“He’s not still into voodoo is he?”

She rolled her eyes. “Mom, I don’t know,” she answered coolly.

“I bet he is,” Lorraine hissed bitterly.

Skylar winced, listening to her mother.

"Don't let that man drag you into anything," Lorraine scolded her, as if she hadn’t given her plenty of warning before she got on the plane. “All he cares about is that African spirit nonsense. He has nothing better to do."

“He’s not forcing me into anything,” Skylar assured Lorraine. Her mother didn’t listen, and continued to bash Grandpa Alan. “Mom, I have to go now. Dinner is ready," she lied. "I’ll call you tomorrow.” She hung up the phone quickly, thanking her lucky stars that she’d be away from Lorraine for the rest of the summer.

Her mother met her father, Ishmael Edoje, at university and married right after graduation. After she was born, they moved to Kenya, where Ishmael’s Luo traditions clashed with her mother's free-spiritedness. Around the time she was six-years-old, the marriage crumbled, prompting her and Lorraine back to Toronto. Since, Lorraine badmouthed the continent, all of it. Because her mother didn’t want her to come to Kenya, she stepped up the badmouthing of her father and grandfather. Ironically, it only made her want to come to Kenya even more. It was only to get away from her mother.

As soon as she began unpacking, she heard rumblings outside her door; moving toward the doorway, she spotted Ishmael in the living room. He looked slimmer than she remembered him. He wore a business suit. Skylar lunged herself into his arms, “Daddy!”

Ishmael Edoje grabbed her by the waist, wielding her to face him. "Skylar," he said, coolly. “My goodness, look at you.”

Ishmael's wife came into view then. She was short, and curvy, and she stared at Skylar with shy curiosity, but didn’t say hello.

"When did you get here?" Ishmael asked.

"Earlier in the evening," she admitted. “I was unpacking…”

"And your grandfather didn't say to me outside," he spoke unbelievingly. "Look at you; you’re a young lady now."

“No, I am not,” she squirmed. She was no lady. She lacked style and grace, and much of any lady-like characteristics for that matter. Her mother, and Michelle Holmes, her friend back home, had spent exhausting time trying to feminize her. It hadn’t worked. As long as she was clean, fed and healthy, little bothered her.

"Skylar, this is my wife, Maja," Ishmael introduced, speaking a few words to Maja in Luo. "This is my daughter, Skylar. She’s from Toronto."

“The U.S.A”

“In Canada,” Ishmael corrected.

“Oh,” Maja said, clearly having never heard of Canada.

"It’s so nice to meet you," Maja smiled, coming to hug her. "You are eighteen?" Maja asked, releasing her.

"I’ll be in about a week, yes. July nineteenth.”

Maja shrugged, not having anything else to say.

Skylar didn't know much about Maja, except that her father had married her in the past two years. Maja was pretty and nice enough. Skylar took a mental note to avoid saying much about her to Lorraine; despite what Lorraine said about Ishmael, Skylar knew her mother still cared about him. Once, when Skylar had asked her why she had married Ishmael in the first place, if she didn't like Africa or his cultural traditions, Lorraine had quietly said:

“He was different."

In later conversations, she'd say she was a naive young girl looking to connect with her African roots. Either way, Skylar always concluded that she still loved Ishmael, and would've wished for the marriage to work out.

Dinner in the small house was quiet. A few times, Ishmael pondered the whereabouts of Grandpa Alan, but didn't dwell on it. After dinner, when his wife had retired to bed, Ishmael invited her to sit with him on the veranda, and there, he asked about how Lorraine was doing. She was surprised. Lorraine had taken great care in not discussing Ishmael at all.

"She's fine."

"Has she remarried?"

"Nope," she answered too honestly. When Skylar thought about it, she realized it was a good idea to say as little about Lorraine to Ishmael as possible. Her mother repeatedly told friends she had no time for a man. Her only husband was her job, as the managing director of an independent radio station in North York, all her free time was spent working.

Skylar and Ishmael fell quiet for some time, because like her, he didn’t seem to know what to say. He was a man of few words. She knew that, but not much else about her father. Her only vivid memory was of him sitting by a baobab tree, holding her and smiling. It was the memory stored in her most treasured photograph of them.

“Why did you come?” he asked suddenly interested.

1st 5 Pages August Workshop - Mayberry


Name: Martha Mayberry
Genre: Young Adult Science Fiction/Romance
Title: Gone Wild

The first day I truly lived was my last day on Earth. I began a metamorphosis. A journey that transformed me into something wild.

It’s hard to look good in a durasuit, but somehow our President managed to pull it off. I studied him as he spoke, trying to figure it out.

His voice blasted through the speakers. “Today’s a historic day for Earth. Our children go forth to propagate a new world!”

Please, I am not a brood mare.

My eyes moved past him to the ships perched like raptors on the runway. Within an hour, my brother Joe and I would sleep inside, cruising across the galaxy. Space icicles.

Stellar 1 and 2 had been successfully colonized and I was crossing my fingers for Stellar 3. Hell, if there were rabbits left on Earth, I’d have mummified toes in my pocket. Ick.

“I wish you didn’t have to go,” Auntie Minerva said. “Stay and I’ll take care of you.”

Joe tugged her shirt. “I can take care of myself.”

She gave him a long look.

“I can take care of myself. I’m almost nine. A man.” He puffed his chest, looking anything but manly to me. He was lean and small for his age. Shortness ran in our family. Great for girls. Not so great for boys. Perhaps he’d grow taller on Stellar 3. Like a transplanted tree. His thick auburn hair was askew and his brown eyes were fierce. Maybe a thorn tree. . .

She grimaced. “Chemicals and cryogenics; it’s all so dangerous.”

Yeah, nail us with the gruesome stuff. Like I’m not nervous enough already?

“Please. We’ll be fine.” I said. “Mom and Dad made it without a hitch.”

“You’re right.” Her face was solemn. “It’s just . . . you’re all I have left.”

That was the crux of the matter. She couldn’t go. Genetic breakdown and all that. And we couldn’t stay. Failing Earth and all that.

“You have to go,” I said. “The other relatives have already left.” I longed to give her a big hug, but her body was frail. Pasting a bright smile on my face, I touched her arm instead.

She sighed and turned to Joe, shaking a finger at him. “Keep hold of your sister’s hand when you board.”

He squirmed. “I don’t want to hold her hand. That’s for babies.”

“What’s this?” she asked, reaching inside his shirt. She plucked a mouse out by the tail. Maurice joined the jumbled contents of her purse. “I told you I’d take care of your pets.”

“Can’t I just bring one?”

She grinned and tousled his hair. “Sorry. I’ll miss you, little man.” Teetering down the stairs, she shuffled toward the secure area near the gate.

My eyes were drawn past her, beyond the fence, to the thousands of spectators crowding the streets, faces peering through the slats. Protestors had signs waving above their heads with the slogans-

Our children belong on Earth
Don’t abandon us

Lovely. There was no escaping Earth’s Eden. I was glad to see them locked out beyond the fence. Security had been high since the onset, but fanatical groups like theirs had infiltrated our project. Once our liftoff had been delayed for weeks and another time someone had assassinated our lead scientist.

But launch day was here. No more running past the picket lines and shrill screams to get to orientation. I turned my back on them for good and focused on the speech.

I baked in the hazy sunshine. My skin was turning an unbecoming shade of pink that matched my strawberry-blond hair and peach durasuit, despite an extra layer of sunblock. I itched from smog dust but resisted the urge to yank my sleeves up and scratch.

I peeked at my watch. Thirty minutes to go. I could make it. I could. As long as I didn’t dwell on what came next, leap off the platform and shove through the crowd, screaming about becoming a space icicle. Yup, gotta wipe that image from my head.

Catching myself nibbling a fingernail, I yanked it away. Joe fidgeted beside me with the energy of a two-year old.

“You’re not a baby,” I hissed. “Pay attention. It’s almost time to board.”

He threw me a sulky look, so I grabbed his arm and held him still. Yanking away, he snarled like the little beast he was and settled onto the platform. He picked up a stick and dragged it across the grate.

A hand touched my back. “Lia.” The whispered voice sent tingles up my spine. I knew who it was before I turned around. Malik.

“Where have you been? I didn’t see you on the other platform. I was afraid you’d backed out.”
He gave me his best are you kidding me? expression. “I snuck away.” His brown eyes danced with mischief, alight in his dark olive face.

I shook my head in exasperation and grinned. “All this security and you jump off your platform and stroll over to mine? What did you do, bribe someone?”

He looked down and dragged his sneaker on the grate, making a squeaky-screechy sound before meeting my eyes. “I had to say goodbye one more time.”

I stroked the silky hair away from his eyes. “That’s sweet, but we’re boarding soon. You should be with the others.” I peeked around him, grateful to see Auntie busy with friends. “What if we’re caught? She’ll kill me.”

“Your aunt? What can she do? I’ll be through the gate and back on the platform before she notices me. Relax. It’s cool.”

I glanced at Joe. He was shredding the stick, shoving pieces between the grates. Leaning into Malik, I locked my fingers through his. “We saw each other last night.”

“That was hours ago,” he said as our lips met. Reaching up, I tangled my fingers in his hair, losing myself in the heat of his kiss.

“Oh, yuck,” said Joe. “Do you have to keep doing that?”

My back stiffened and I looked down at him. “What do you mean by that?”

“I followed you when you snuck out. I wouldn’t have if I knew you were going to sit around kissing.” He scrunched his face like he was in terrible pain.

“You watched us?” Now I was the one in pain. My little brother had peeped? Could my life get any worse?

“Not for long. It was boring.”

Malik’s lips twitched. His expression was so cute I stole another kiss.

“Take your hands off my niece, Malik Salvaje.”

Yup, my life could get worse.

Auntie spun me away. I opened my mouth in protest, but the disappointment in her eyes held me still. “And you.” Her infamous finger waggled in my face. “I barely turn my back and you’re kissing this boy on the big screen.”

I looked down at the platform, wishing I had my own stick to shred.

Auntie whirled on Malik, scrutinizing him like a bug in her tea. “I don’t like you. You’re a wild boy, from a wild family.”

My breath blew out, fluffing my bangs. Here it comes. They were at each other in seconds.

“You’ve been trouble since the moment you got here. I know I speak for everyone when I say I’ll be delighted to watch the door slam behind you when you board that ship.”

I grabbed his hand, hoping to hold back the words I knew he longed to shout. Nothing slowed Auntie, however.




1st 5 Pages August Workshop - Catalano

Name: Pete Catalano
Genre: Middle Grade Magical Realism
Title: UNLIMITED WISHES


And then there was a resounding crash.

I lurched backwards, barely escaping the explosion of the huge, over-sized box of spare parts I salvaged from the computer lab’s Annual Spring Cleaning. Only after lifting it off the ground and carrying it for several blocks, did I realize I had greatly underestimated both its weight and my ability to carry it.

Staying on my knees, I watched helplessly as the box fell in slow motion. In the moment it took to hit the ground, all the painstaking work I had done sorting the smaller parts into glass jars was lost, as they burst into a thousand razor-sharp shards upon impact and scattered across the sidewalk. I froze, waiting for the tinkling sound of broken glass to stop before I dared move again.

My name is Luke Price, I’m thirteen years old, and I’m waiting, sometimes rather impatiently, to be . . . older. Having lived in the small town of Claxton, North Carolina for my entire life I’ve been both very comfortable, and exceptionally bored, but encouraged by the fact that I know it can’t last forever.

Too small for football, too slow for track, too smart for student council, not needy enough for chess club, I found my niche and guaranteed my safety through my ability to fix anything with a mother board.

With my chin up and my head down, I’m funny, a die-hard tech-head with a limitless imagination, and I’m hopeful. Unless you have a miracle or a magic wand, these three qualities are an essential combination to survive any given day in middle school.

As I got home with as many good parts as I was able to manage, I plopped down on a chair in the kitchen and spent a moment carefully pulling tiny shards of glass out of my clothes as my little brother, Max, came stumbling into the room. He was three, and even at that age, you could see the potential he had for his height to soar above mine, and that realization didn’t do anything to enhance the little amount of self-esteem I needed to muster every day just to get out of bed.

Odin, our one-hundred-and-forty pound sheepdog, followed Max closely. I was never quite sure if Odin was protecting Max from the terrors of the world or protecting the world from the terror we called Max.

“What have you been doing today?” I asked him, not really interested in the answer, but just chattering as I got up and looked for something to eat . . . and something to do.

“Playing . . . ” Max said slowly, his eyes never once looking in my direction as he wrestled with Odin across the floor of the kitchen, “ . . . in your room.”

“Mom,” I slammed the refrigerator shut and ran up the stairs to my room two steps at a time, stopping just short of the doorway. Much to my dismay, the light was on and the door was cracked open. I moved cautiously, knowing full well that if I was about to step into a disaster that would produce a violent reaction, Max wasn’t yet within my reach, so I needed to give him a little bit of time to catch up.

Hearing his footsteps and the distinct sound of Odin’s jingling collar coming down the hall behind me, I stepped up to my door, gave it a slight push, and waited breathlessly as it silently glided open on smooth, well-oiled hinges.

From first look, things seemed fairly undisturbed, but again, this was just a pre-emptive, skimming-the-surface observation, checking to see if there were any walls cracked, ceiling tiles pulled down, or any structural damage that was readily apparent or dangerously unsafe.

Realizing that the damage or rather “play,” as Max called it, had been contained to something less obvious, but possibly far more terrifying, I started to look at my individual, collectible items . . . the ones that, if looked at, touched, or even breathed on, carried the naturally-standard penalty of death.

There are three things I value more than anything in this world . . . my video game collection, my comic book collection, and my cell phone.

My video game collection took up space on several shelves on the wall just below the console. Since they were in order by type and frequency of use, they would be quick and easy to go through to make sure that none of them were damaged or even out of place. Watch Dogs, Grand Theft Auto V, Call of Duty: Ghosts, FIFA 14, NBA 2K14, it looked like all the important ones were there. After a few moments, I knew that particular part of my collection was safe, and I moved onto the next.

My comic book collection was far more extensive and kept in plastic sheets and arranged alphabetically . . . and by value. They would take a little longer to go through.

There are two comics, in particular, Superman #14 and Spiderman #8, that are graded. Thankfully they were valued on the basis of their age and condition and then encased between two sheets of hard plastic, and out of the hands of busy little brothers.

I looked over at Max, who had now managed to join me in the hunt, followed closely by Odin, of course, who in this particular case was certainly protecting Max from me.

“So do you want to tell me what you were playing with,” my fingers moved rapidly through my comic collection, “or do you just figure you and Odin can outrun me when I find out what you did?” I waited for an answer. “You planning on just jumping on his back and having him run for daylight?”

Max shrugged and sat on the floor next to Odin, either not sure what I was doing or taunting me in the subtlest way I have ever been taunted.

“Mom!” I yelled out one more time, hoping to put both this hunt and my anxiety to an abrupt end.

“What is all the ruckus in here?” Mom asked as she came into my room to find me going through my comic books and Max and Odin staring up at me. “Ooooh, now isn’t that sweet,” she said. “See, Luke, I told you that he just adores you.”

“He doesn’t adore me,” I protested and accidently allowed a short, brief whine to escape out of sheer frustration. I stopped what I was doing, as I was taken by surprise by that long, high-pitched cry. It was a sound emanating from me that was very familiar from my own Max-like days, but something that I hoped I would never manage to make again.

Once the initial embarrassment was gone, I went on with my explanation. “Max said he was playing in my room today, and I was trying to isolate the damage. I thought if I could find whatever he did, whatever he touched, whatever he even looked at for a bit too long, I would be able to correct the problem or even reverse it. But he’s not talking. He’s just sitting there mocking me, and he’s even pulled Odin into his little mind game as well.” She looked at both of them and then looked back at me. “I think we may need to get a little physical with him.”

“Max?” my mother asked . . . one time.