Monday, July 22, 2013

July First Five Pages Workshop Revisions with Guest Mentor Susan Dennard

The entries for the second (and final) revision round for this month's First Five Pages workshop are up based on the phenomenal initial rounds of feedback from our guest mentor Susan Dennard and the other mentors and workshop participants. Thanks to everyone who volunteered an opinion!

The changes have been dramatic. Please take a look below and see what the writers have done to incorporate the suggested changes. And by all means, let them know what else is left to do!

As always, we encourage everyone to participate! It's a great chance to peek over the shoulder of a popular, published author and see if what she sees is the same as what you notice when you read critically.

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About Susan Dennard

Susan is a 28-year-old reader, writer, lover of animals, and eater of cookies. She used to be a marine biologist, but now she write novels. And not novels about fish either, but novels for kids, teens, and adults about kick-butt heroines and swoon-worthy rogues (she really likes swoon-worthy rogues).

She grew up in the southern US, where she suffered from mosquitoes, humidity, and a desperate desire to live in a castle. Oh, and crazy vegetarian parents who never let her eat meat. Needless to say, she read a lot in those days and often composed wretched stories for her sister’s amusement. (Really, they were veryveryvery wretched stories.)

She currently live in the Midwestern US with her French husband and Irish setter, and you can learn more about her crazy thoughts and crippling cookie-addiction on twitter, facebook, or Goodreads.

Her debut, Something Strange and Deadly, came out in 2012 from HarperTeen, and the sequel, A Darkness Strange and Lovely, is out this month. you will never believe how happy this makes me!
About SOMETHING STRANGE AND DEADLY

The year is 1876, and there’s something strange and deadly loose in Philadelphia…

Eleanor Fitt has a lot to worry about. Her brother has gone missing, her family has fallen on hard times, and her mother is determined to marry her off to any rich young man who walks by. But this is nothing compared to what she’s just read in the newspaper—

The Dead are rising in Philadelphia.

And then, in a frightening attack, a zombie delivers a letter to Eleanor…from her brother.

Whoever is controlling the Dead army has taken her brother as well. If Eleanor is  going to find him, she’ll have to venture into the lab of the notorious Spirit-Hunters, who protect the city from supernatural forces. But as Eleanor spends more time with the Spirit-Hunters, including their maddeningly stubborn yet handsome inventor, Daniel, the situation becomes dire. And now, not only is her reputation on the line, but her very life may hang in the balance.


ABOUT A DARKNESS STRANGE AND LOVELY

Following an all-out battle with the walking Dead, the Spirit Hunters have fled Philadelphia, leaving Eleanor alone to cope with the devastating aftermath. But there’s more trouble ahead.

The evil necromancer Marcus has returned, and his diabolical advances have Eleanor escaping to Paris to seek the help of Joseph, Jie, and the infuriatingly handsome Daniel once again. 

When she arrives, however, she finds a whole new darkness lurking in this City of Light. As harrowing events unfold, Eleanor is forced to make a deadly decision that will mean life or death for everyone.

1st 5 Pages July Workshop - Ellie Rev 2

Name: Ellie
Genre: Young Adult Fantasy
Title: Northern

Liko took a deep breath and slowly slithered her way over the ceiling beam she was lying on. The wood was silky under her fingertips, slippery enough to slide right off and fall two stories to the unforgiving marble floor below. Her fingers were twitching as if playing an invisible piano. She had to force them into fists to stop them as she peeked over the side of the beam. If she was going to steal a mission, she wouldn’t let a simple deadly drop stop her.

Papers and pots of ink were strewn over the surface of the oak desk that consumed the center of the room. An oversized porcelain cup filled with steaming coffee sat to the right of a half melted wax candle and stamp. The smell encompassed the room; a nutty, chocolaty aroma, with a hint of hazelnut. The Imperio lived off that stuff.

Liko scanned the doors in Imperio Catherine’s briefing room, making sure, for the umpteenth time that they were still clear. If she needed to make a quick break, she’d have to haul through the main door. The other two doors-one strictly for the Imperio's guards and a side exit only for the Imperio herself- would just be running straight into booby-trapped rune hallways she wouldn’t have time to deal with. The main entrance would be clear and she could lose any pursuers in the marble mansion. The only problem would be running into any heavy oak doors carved with locking runes. The briefing room was the one room not fitted with them. Only the moon goddesses knew why Imperio Catherine chose to have beads hanging in her doorways instead of rune locking oak. The beads clinked together; sending small tunes throughout the room that made Liko’s skin shiver.

Three figures stood below Liko; Catherine, and the two boys she was briefing.

Catherine stood in front of her desk. Liko could only see the back of her black short hair and her silk robes billowing around her. Nayeeshi stood stone straight in front of Catherine; the only thing that ruined his overachieving picture perfect ironed appearance was the mop of black hair he refused to let anyone touch. Tarin stood next to him, a striking contrast to Nayeeshi. He made looking like he rolled out of bed an attractive form of art. His orangey hair was mussed up, and his uniform jacket was unzipped, his low hanging shirt showing off his collarbones. He was way too handsome for his own good.

“Nayeeshi, you’ll be going alone on this mission.” Catherine said.

Liko’s eyes shot to Tarin as he stepped forward. “Alone? But we’re-“

Catherine waved him off with a delicate hand. “Tarin. I know you two are attached at the hip, but you need to cut the cord and train the new recruits.”

Liko held back a laugh at Nayeeshi and Tarin’s indignant look. Perfect. She thought. It would be much easier to steal a solo mission. Less danger and less chance of getting caught.

It wasn’t anything against the boys. She was grateful that Nayeeshi and Tarin took the time to train her on their own. But she wanted more than just a backyard training session. She wanted to be a part of the village’s training class, learning to fight and protect the village if the Regia and their Hunter dogs finally broke through their barriers. The only thing stopping her was Imperio Catherine; she thought Liko was better suited for scholarly scriptures and memorizing ledgers.

Catherine pushed some papers around her desk, almost knocking over a quill holder before pulling out a small parchment. She brushed it off with the back of her hand, revealing an inked map with a red marking. “You’re to retrieve a gem that’s been hidden in a cavern to the North.” Catherine’s voice was soft and low. Liko leaned farther over the beam to hear. “It’s in Hunter territory, but supposedly unguarded. The cavern isn’t very deep so it won’t be difficult to navigate.”

Liko squinted down at the map. After she was certain she got a good look, she closed her eyes and recalled the image. She looked back at the map to double check her memory and smiled when it was perfect.

“Why do we need this gem anyway?” Tarin asked, scrutinizing the map.

Catherine released a heavy sigh. “Honestly, Tarin, you have no patience.” She handed the map to Nayeeshi. “It’s one of a pair that is originally ours, but was taken. We’re just getting them back.”

“I’m guessing this information is from our ace informant?” Nayeeshi asked in his usual monotone voice. When Catherine nodded, both the boys instantly seemed more interesting.

Liko rolled her eyes. They acted like being a spy in the Hunter’s city was a gift from the moon goddesses or something. Spying wasn’t hard. She was doing it right now.

Seeing that the briefing was close to its end, Liko shimmied her way backwards on the beam. When she got to the end, she pulled herself up onto the beam above her and crawled through the open vent leading to the back of the building's second floor. She’d accidentally found this crevice when she was eleven and Catherine told her she wasn’t ready to be trained. Liko had snuck into her office to find out who she thought was ready. Then, when Catherine came in unexpectedly, Liko climbed up onto the ceiling beams and found the vent.

Holding her breath to listen for footsteps, Liko scanned the area, making sure no one was around before she dropped and rolled into the courtyard. Her stomach felt like river rapids breaking inside her. She was doing this; she was taking Nayeeshi’s mission. Her blood thrummed through her body as if it was so excited it would burst out of her skin. Her fingers started flicking out.

She doubled checked her pockets and pouches to make sure she was prepared, then felt her shirt for her whistle; the most important thing. Without her whistle-key, she’d never be able to get back into the city. It was engraved with runes that allowed her to go through the barrier that protected them. “This will be a good day.”

“And why is that?”

Liko squeaked and spun. “Tarin,” she breathed. “By the moons, you scared the life out of me!”

Tarin chuckled, his green eyes glimmering. He was leaning against the side of the building looking too handsome. “Guilty about something?”

Liko scrunched up her nose and stuffed her hands in her back pockets. “Shouldn’t you be off with Nayeeshi or something?” Wasn’t he just inside? If he’s out, that means Nayeeshi should be out as well. Liko shifted form one foot to the other.

His face fell slightly, losing the smugness that was there. He looked her over, stuffing his own hands in his jacket pockets. “He’s getting more information.” He moved off the wall with languid grace Liko couldn’t help but admire, his hair falling over his forehead.

“Got a mission without you?” The thought of Catherine needing to give Nayeeshi more information made Liko’s fingers itch. She stuffed them deeper in her pockets. What more could he need to know about retrieving a simple rock?

Tarin narrowed his eyes. “Sneaking around where you’re not supposed to be, huh?”

Liko stiffened. Caught. Dammit. She should have known better. Of course Tarin would notice. Heat curled up her neck and over her face. So much for being a master spy. Instead of admitting anything, Liko lifted her chin up and looked away, towards the market, where she needed to go. He could think whatever he wanted.

“You know sneaking around during briefings won’t take your mind off not being trained.” He placed a hand on her head and her stomach started doing acrobatic tricks. His hand was warm; his fingers long and elegant, and those eyes- By the goddess she needed to stop getting distracted.

Liko scrunched up her face and pushed his hand away. “I know that.” She was just about to make an excuse to leave, when she saw his face. He was looking at the Imperio’s building like it was a ship sailing off without him. “You worried about Nayeeshi?”

Tarin blinked, taken back. “’Course not. He can take care of himself.”

“I know.” Liko said, seeing Tarin’s shoulders relax a bit. “He’ll be back before dinner time.”

Tarin’s lip twitched up on one side, forming a dimple, he scratched at the beauty mark under his left eye. “How about I give you a training session later? We could work on your hand to hand combat first, and you still need to work on getting out of holds.”

“I’m glad I have so many things I need to work on.” Liko didn’t bother trying to hide the sarcasm in her tone. He was too distracting. She needed as much of a head start on Nayeeshi as possible, but that stupid dimple and that smile- Her fingers twitched again.

“If you were too good, I wouldn’t have an excuse to spend time with you.”

Liko turned her face away so he couldn’t see her blush. He knew exactly what to say to make her heart go on a rampage in her guts. But now was not the time for this.

“After I train the novices, we can meet up in the training hall. Sound good?”

Liko forced a smile. She had to get rid of him before Nayeeshi finished his briefing. She had to focus on the mission and not the way the sun hit Tarin’s eyes. “Sounds good.”

He smiled back. “Alright.” He mussed up her hair and winked before turning towards the training grounds. “See you later, ’princess.’” He gave a wave before shoving his hands in his pockets and walking away.

1st 5 Pages July Workshop - Frye Rev 2

Name: Cassie Frye
Genre: YA Contemporary/Paranormal Twists
Title: Fade

The girl in the bathroom mirror is not me.

I swallow a knot in my throat, and run a shaking hand through my hair—hair that is now thick, brown, and curly. I used to be blond, I used to be taller, and I used to be thinner. Now, this strange girl looks back at me, with hair that feels fake; like doll hair.

I can’t help myself. At the sight of the unfamiliar face, I feel a pressure rise in my chest, and proceed to let my legs drop by the toilet to vomit. My mouth opens, my mind screams.

Moments later, once I’ve emptied the contents of my stomach, there’s a knock. My head jerks toward the noise. Whoever it is, probably heard me vomit.

“Meredith, is everything okay?” The female voice asks.

My name is not Meredith—it’s Hana—and I’m almost about to correct the woman, but hold my tongue. No one would believe my story anyway. Am I crazy? A part of me doesn’t want to answer this, and a part of me is afraid of what others would think if I tried to explain. So I take in a sharp breath, to keep from losing it. I dry heave a few more times and swallow my doubt.

“Yeah,” I croak.

“You’re sick,” she answers.

I wipe my lips and flush the toilet. It feels like an eternity before I’m able to speak again. And even then, my voice is hoarse and lacks conviction.

“I—I’m fine.”

Perhaps this is a dream. I force my breathing to slow at the thought. Dreams had a tendency to feel real. They also had a tendency to be a bit on the weird side. Pretty soon, I’ll wake up, imagine having to live the rest of my life in a different body, and laugh.

But that thought doesn’t stop the tremors.

I bite my lip so tight, I’m surprised there’s no blood. Then I watch as my reflection bites her lips as well. No matter how long I stare at that damned mirror, though, my reflection doesn’t change. I want to scream, but nothing comes up.

What happened last night? I know I went to a party, but I don’t remember much of it. Did I get drunk? As the designated driver, though, I promised to get my friends home in one piece; and I always keep my word. I think about Krista and Bridget, my best friends. Maybe they can fill me in on what happened last night. I resolve to call them ASAP, when the woman’s voice pulls me away from the mirror.

“Maybe you should get some rest.”

Who is this woman, anyway? “Just leave me alone!” I snap. There's a silence that follows, and I begin listening to my breath. In and Out.

Then the woman bangs hard on the door. “Meredith, open up!”

I need to get rid of the woman, so I try not to freak out; I try not to yell, when I turn the lock and crack the door. The woman before me looks a lot like the girl in the mirror, except older. Meredith’s mother, perhaps? No wonder she’s concerned. “Please,” I tell her. “I’m fine. I just need a moment. I’ll be down in a sec.”

“Should I call the doctor?” A doctor is the last person I want to see.

I tell her, “I’m fine,” again. How many times do I have to say it? Probably until I believe it.

"I'll get you some water, then. " She heads down the stairs without waiting for an answer.
Then I close the door, lightly, and loosen my tight grip around the knob. I take the silence as an opportunity to recollect my thoughts.

One: I am not in my body.

Two: This is not my home.

Three: I need to find out what happened last night.

My stomach gives little twisty jolts, as I turn on the faucet. The sound of running water is oddly soothing. Then I gather the liquid in my cupped hands, and splash it on my face. My arms feel heavier, I think, and I notice my fingers are a bit shorter as the water rushes over them. Nails are also bitten to the stub. I shudder. A nail biter.

When I look at the mirror for the third time, I can’t help but pray that I’m mistaken, but the same brown-haired girl is looking back. No illusion.

And then I see it. I’m seeing double, another Meredith standing right beside me in the mirror. I blink, and look to my left, where she supposedly stands. No one. Maybe I’m seeing things.

“Hello, Hana."

My name. My real name. I clasp a hand to my mouth. The voice comes from my right, and when I turn, she's there. Meredith. But I’m Meredith. Or at least, I’m in her body. I cast a wary glance at the mirror, to find both of us standing side by side. We’re identical, save for the pajamas I’m wearing and the tight red dress she’s wearing—the same red dress I wore to the party last night. I blink again, four times, hoping she’ll disappear.

She doesn’t.

Meredith rubs a hand against her left arm, lips tight. My heart pounds as I take a few steps back, almost falling into the tub. I reach out a hand against the wall to steady myself and blurt out the first words that come to mind. “What’s going on?!” Meredith just stares at me, defiantly.

It’s then that I notice she’s an exact image of Meredith, but not…fully formed. As if she’s a projection of light. As if she’s a ghost.

She walks, or more accurately, floats around me, as if she’s inspecting me. I feel chill bumps rise on my arms, but I’m too frozen in shock to rub them down. When she doesn’t answer, I’m barely able to ask how she knows my name. Obviously, if she knows my name, she knows what happened. And more importantly, she can tell me how to get out of this body.

“I suppose you know what happened. You’re in my body now, and I’m…” Meredith moves her hands, up and down her body, “well, you get the picture.”

“Obviously,” I snap. I want her to get to the point.

“And I know your name, because I switched bodies with you. Have you already forgotten?" There’s a pause, and her lips move, like she’s about to say something else, but no words come. With a frustrated moan, she turns.

“HEY!” I yell. I’m no longer shaking, desperation somehow drowning my fear.

Meredith keeps floating away, so I take a few quick strides and reach out to grab her arm. My hand passes right through her, like she’s made of air.

I let my hand hang limp, and call out to her again. “Tell me how to switch back!”

That gets her attention, and Meredith turns to face me. Her lips are pulled tight again, her fists clenching and unclenching. There’s a moment of hesitation before she lets out a shaky breath. I get the feeling that she’s not happy about the situation. There's a sad look on her face. It's the kind of face one makes when giving bad news.

“I don’t think you want to switch back,” she tells me.

“Why?” I ask.

“Because you’re dead.”

1st 5 Pages July Workshop - Sadd Rev 2

Name: Donna L Sadd
Genre: Middle Grade Adventure/Fantasy
Title: OCEAN'S EDGE- The Mystical Underwater Adventures of Katie Stone


"Finny! Flop Man!" Katie Stone called out to the sea. She splashed water on her tanning arms and pouted. It was only a matter of time before those pesky freckles, everybody else thought were cute, reared their ugly heads across the bridge of her nose.

With each outgoing wave, she stood still and let her feet sink further into the wet, foamy sand at the shoreline of her home, East Ashley Avenue, Folly Beach, South Carolina. Wow! Would the rest of the summer be as fab as this beautiful morning?" Content to see her best friend standing waist deep in the surf, she smiled remembering all the summer days they shared growing up. "Woot, woot, the seventh grade is history and we have all summer in front of us, Paulie! The kids should be here any sec, now," said Katie.

Paulie's midsection lifted, then her back nudged forward, as cool waves of the Atlantic Ocean came and went. "It's totally roasting out. It'll sure be 'cool' taking a ride on your dolphins...get it- cool, wet?" joked Paulie who let out a wry chuckle, squinting at Katie back on the shore. Look how nice the sun reflects off her shiny, short red hair. "Any day now guys."


Katie let Paulie's usual lame joke go in one ear and out the other, as she trailed her toe in the sand along the shoreline. "Have you ever wondered about these bubbles left along the ocean's edge when the waves break on the shore and then leave? Can air go under the sea? Could creatures breathe under the surface?"

"You're weird; they're just stupid bubbles. Creatures breathing under the surface, MEH. Fish do it every day," replied Paulie.

"No, I meant people, like from another worl..."

"Hey, here they come!" Paulie interrupted.

Signaled by the glistening silhouettes of two bottlenose dolphins whose beak-like snouts jutted in the air and beckoned, the girls quickly dove and swam out to meet them. Quick to duck behind Finny, as Flopman performed his signature spin and a flop move where, with a splash of his tail, he still managed to swamp the girls with a torrent of sea water. They laughed and choked and choked and laughed until they got their bearings again.

"I call Finny!" Paulie shouted as she grabbed Finny's smooth rubber-like dorsal fin with both hands and hung on and as the dolphin aimed towards the horizon. KAK, Paulie spit the salty sea from her mouth as she adjusted her grip to keep her head above water on the large, grey dolphin. "I swear this girl could pull a ship; she's so strong."

Giggles erupted when salty sprays of water rhythmically hit Katie's face as the dolphins sailed through the shimmering waves. She scanned the waters for a resident friend and beamed a bright smile when the familiar round shadow approached.

Hi, Caretta!" said Katie as she greeted the large Loggerhead turtle. "Flipper still flipping okay, Baby?" Caretta popped her head up and nodded, displaying a born-with sweet smile. Katie took the three-foot round turtle's flipper in her hand and examined it. "Just checking, though you'd never know that you were ever injured as a baby at all."

Finny and Flopman slowed their paced to accommodate the slower Caretta, as the girls chatted in tow.

"Do you miss your dad yet?" Katie asked as her hand smoothed across Finny's slick back.

"Are you kidding?" Paulie frowned and swatted at a wave. "Why would I miss him; he's never around anyway."

"Well, he's still your dad−"

"Let him stay at New York headquarters; Mom's a pushover when he's not around." Paulie's frown deepened. "Though it does suck not getting to go somewhere cool this summer. I had my heart set on Nepal this time around because Dad's UNICEF mission was to work to empower girls. Anyway, you've got me all summer, mi mejor amiga."

"Drop us off at the beach now, guys," said Katie. Finny and Flopman instantly pointed towards shore. "Let's pick up where we left off with the shell collecting; I'm tired of Mrs. Ziffleman winning. What do you say we bring home the "Folly Beach Sea Shell Collector of the Year" trophy this summer?"

"I say, let's hope our summer will have more excitement in it than just beating Old Lady Ziffleman. I want to have an adventure! Can't we just have one cool summer?" Paulie whined as she kicked at the water walking back up to shore.

"I don't think there's too much adventure to find, but we could still have fun," said Katie as she bent down in the water's wake, grabbed a handful of sand, and inspected it for shells. "We can go to the library and do some follow-up research on the Atlantis myth that we studied."

Paulie rolled her eyes and flopped in the sand, "Oh, come on Katie. We just got out of school and you want to stick your head in books again? You're not hiding out in books this summer, Girlfriend!"

Katie winced. She can read me like a book, but I'm, I'm just not the adventurous type. Katie turned her back, knelt in the sand and made like she had found an interesting shell to stop the conversation.




Rabat, Morocco- Africa


Standing at the bow of one of his father's small sardine boats, off the coast of Gozo, a small fishing village, Adisa worked to pull his net from the magnificent clear, blue waters of the Mediterranean. "It's snagged," he mumbled in Arabic, then kicked off his sandals, looked at his watch, and dove into the sea.

Mindful of barracudas, Adisa worked to free the net from a small formation of rough fossil coral, as tiny seahorses danced by him. Captivated by a meandering octopus, his eyes followed it to discover something glimmering on the white sandy bed. Feeling a sudden sharp stabbing pain in his chest, he scooped up the object and net and rushed to the surface.

He popped his head out of the water with a huge gush of breath, and immediately looked at his watch. "New record! I held my breath down there for three minutes this time!" he exclaimed as he climbed back on the boat and collapsed on deck.

He held out the rounded chunk of red rock, and as he examined it, the rock warmed in his hand. This rock is special.




Bolivia, South America


As Katie and Paulie searched for shells, and Adisa sat mesmerized by his peculiar red rock, a girl in Bolivia dug for relics for her father's tourist business.

Pilar unearthed a peculiar smooth and shiny black rock from the ground near the ancient ruins of Tiwanaku. "What a beautiful, shiny rock! Mama told me this type of crystal offers protection and is powerful in contacting spirits," she said in Spanish.

"I'm keeping it! Papa would laugh at me if I brought him back a rock as a relic anyway." She shook her head and laughed at the thought of her father trying to sell a rock. "Even stupid tourists wouldn't be that stupid!"

Pilar's eyes bulged when her brilliant black rock glowed in her hand.



Folly Beach, South Carolina


Katie shook the shell strainer as she lifted it from the water that rushed in then eased out over her outstretched legs. Sopping wet sand plopped into the water and splashed her cheeks, then dripped to a stop until all that remained were bulkier occupants of the sea. She checked each piece and skip-tossed the rejects.

"Throw it all back, Katie; it's just a bunch of rocks," griped Paulie, who took to scrutinizing Katie's catch because she was not having much luck finding prized olive shells, or any other shells worth keeping for that matter.


Katie lifted the strainer to toss the contents. "Hey, take a look at this," she said as she took something out of it and waved Paulie closer.


She held a bright white rectangular rock, no bigger than an inch wide, half an inch tall, and about a quarter of an inch thick, whose rounded edges Katie naturally surmised had been worn down from centuries of the ebb and flow of the sea.


"This looks like a carving of an ancient structure, like something I've seen in a book somewhere," Katie said, as she zeroed in to notice several huge columns that stood at what seemed to be the entrance of a grand edifice. "It's like something waits inside, but it's all shadowy," she said as she tried to peer deeper.

Katie's heart beat faster as her stomach fluttered. This is no ordinary rock.

Just then, Paulie exclaimed, "OMG, Katie, look the rock is glowing!"


Katie, Paulie, Adisa and Pilar all gasped simultaneously as their stones glowed in their hands.

Katie and Paulie stood transfixed as white light streamed from the stone and exploded in the space before them. They rubbed their eyes as two figures appeared in the light. A tall brown boy stood on the deck of a small, blue wooden boat, and stared at something red and glowing in his hand, and a petite tan girl wearing colorful clothing and a brimmed hat, stared at a shimmering black object.

Images of Katie and Paulie were held in Pilar's and Adisa's light beams, along with the other.

"What's happening here?" asked Katie as she turned to see Paulie fall faint in the sand.




1st 5 Pages July Workshop - Miriam Rev 2

Name: Miriam
Genre: YA Fantasy
Title: Nightfallen


The men in the clearing look lost, far away from home knowing they will never go back. The light filters through the trees casting green shadows on the ground. It should smell clean out in the middle of nowhere, but instead there is an overwhelming stench of decay. The infected are gathered in a loose circle getting ready to set up camp. Some of their bodies can barely move, the disease has spread so far.

My father leads our team of fighters, signaling men to move around the clearing. They are silent as they tread carefully into place. We should be able to stop any of the infected from escaping as long as the men hold the perimeter.

I step next to him. With his hand on my shoulder, he leans in next to my ear. “Lexy, there are twelve in the clearing. They may have reinforcements.” My role is to step in and draw their attention to begin fighting. If they do not attack me, we move on. They aren’t far enough gone to kill yet.

I nod and grab my katana in one hand, my knife in another. I peer through the trees assessing the situation. My first rush of adrenaline shows my anticipation for the next few minutes. A group is gathered around a small fire. The infected look tired. A few have the gray bubbles spreading up along their faces. They shouldn’t be able to fight back as quickly as the others. I watch as each man from our group steps into place, blocking any escape path.

At my dad’s signal, I step into the clearing alone. I walk until the talking stops and everyone in the group is staring at me. Twelve sets of eyes, and still no one moves. I wait expectant. I’m ready for this. But I dread it, too.

“Are you lost?” one of the infected asks. His voice is rough. He doesn’t have any gray bubbles that I can see, but there is a nasty looking bite mark on his arm, with dark streaks of red running up it.

“No.” His concern surprises me. I’m not used to anyone worrying about my safety. I hold my hands steady, shifting my weight slightly as I take in the clearing around me, looking for holes in the ground or things I might trip on. It’s all I can do to hold myself back from the attack.

“You should probably go then,” he says. “I can’t guarantee that they’ll leave you alone.” He waves his arm around him, and the other people in the group just look at me. Most of them settle back down on the log and ignore me. But one of the younger men stands up. He grabs a knife next to him, and rushes toward me. Finally, we can begin.

I bring my sword up to block his downward swing. His blade bounces off my sword, but his other arm grabs my wrist. I move back, and away from him. For the first time in a long time, I stumble. I forget about the men in the clearing around me backing me up. All I can feel is his iron grip on my wrist. All I can hear is the heavy sound of his breath, and all I can see are his cold blue eyes as he comes towards me. Fear washes over me, slowing down the scene, making every second last longer than it should.
I twist away from him, pulling back as he swings his knife again.

One of the younger men from my father’s group crashes into the clearing. The sound momentarily distracts me from the infected in front of me. No one moves to help him as four of the infected stand up and begin converging on him. Four against one is not a fair fight.

The infected grabs me again, and I manage to pull back and down so he misses my throat, but the tip of the knife still slices across my cheek. It happens so fast that at first it doesn’t feel like anything. Then the stinging starts.

The pain snaps me out of my daze. The fear of infection surges through me. I have to get away from him to protect myself. I thrust myself forward, swinging my sword wide. I can’t reach his neck, so I settle for a sharp jab at his middle. As I pull my sword out of his stomach, he leans forward clutching his middle, and I move quickly slicing off his head.

The sound of my blood rushing through my ears fades, and around me I hear the shouts of the men, and the sounds of guns rushing forward. The man who stumbled in the clearing is close to being overwhelmed. He is carrying a pump action shotgun and no knives or sword. Although he has blasted away one of the infected, his next shot goes wide. The other three are too close, and one grabs him before he has time to reload and fire again.

He screams, high pitched and wild as he writhes trying to break free, and avoid being bitten. If you become infected, you slowly lose your mind until you begin to attack and feed on others. We kill those who have reached that point to prevent them from damning their souls further.

I pull my knife out of the sheath on my thigh and swing it forward, hitting the infected who has him just below the base of the skull. The infected drops, and the man keeps screaming. As far as I can tell, he doesn’t have any injuries. Two more shots go off while I reach for my other knife and the two infected near him drop to the ground.

Dennis rushes forward, grabbing me. He puts me in the truck and pulls out a compress soaked in alcohol and presses it to my check. My eye begins to water. The fear of infection makes my hands shake. The adrenaline should be leaving me now that the fight is over, but it is still zinging through me.

The rest of the men are in the clearing, cleaning up. After we kill the infected, we try to save their souls. Since their bodies were unclean from the disease, we burn them and my dad prays for them. The ceremony takes some time.

“We need to get you back to the infirmary and give you a booster shot,” Dennis says.

“Emma’s not going to be happy about this.”

I just nod. The cut is starting to throb more, and tears burn my eyes. I blink them away making sure my dad doesn’t see me. Tears aren’t worth the anger he will direct at me if he sees them.

Over the sound of the men in the clearing, a wolf howls. Suddenly it is silent. Everyone is frozen, when the sound is repeated back on the other side of the clearing. The echoing sound pushes people forward. The men stop what they are doing and pick up their weapons.

My father runs towards us, then we hear a third howl. My father starts the truck and begins pulling away before the door slams. Men are still in the clearing scrambling into the other truck. Smoke is rising from the fire we set, but no one is stopping to put it out. I’m dizzy, and my stomach lurches along with the truck.

“Travis, how did they find us?” Dennis asks. He is still dabbing at my cheek.

Monday, July 15, 2013

1st 5 Pages July Workshop - Sadd Rev 1

Name: Donna L Sadd
Genre: Middle Grade Adventure/Fantasy
Title: OCEAN'S EDGE- The Mystical Underwater Adventures of Katie Stone

"Finny! Flop Man!" Katie called out to the sea. Her gold-flecked green eyes glistened as the sun reflected off her bobbed auburn hair. Her year-round, tanned, slim body would grow browner, and her demure freckles would soon be coaxed to dance across her cheekbones.

"They should be here any sec, Paulie. I can't believe the 7th grade is over and summer is finally here- YES!"

"Folly's summer's are always totally roasting. It'll sure be 'cool' taking a ride on your dolphins...get it- cool, wet?" Paulie chuckled at her own joke as she ran her black-tipped fingers through pitch black, short-cropped hair. Ignoring her friend's bad joke, trailing her toe in the sand along the shoreline, Katie asked, "Paulie, have you ever wondered about these bubbles at the ocean's edge? Can air go under the sea? Could creatures breathe under the surface?

"You're weird, Katie; they're just stupid bubbles. Creatures breathing under the surface? Fish do it every day," replied Paulie.

"No, I meant people, like from another worl..."

"Hey, here they come now!"

Two bottlenose dolphins swam close to shore as the girls waded out to meet them. Flopman performed his signature spin and a flop move, and playfully swamped the girls with his flukes.

"I don't think that I'll ever get over how you communicate with these guys, Katie. It's like you've got a psychic connection to sea life or something. I call Finny!" Paulie said as she quickly grabbed the dolphin's huge dorsal fin as it aimed towards the horizon. "I swear this girl could pull a ship; she's so strong."

The dolphins sailed the girls through the foamy waves, and Katie waved to each Loggerhead turtle they passed. A huge one, about three feet round, paddled over to Katie.

Hi, Caretta!" greeted Katie, "Feel like powering up, Baby Doll?" Caretta popped her head up and nodded, with a born-with sweet smile. She took the massive turtle's flipper in one hand, while holding Flop Man's dorsal fin with the other. The two took off at racing speed, as Katie skied barefoot through the waves.

"I swear, that girl was a fish in another life. Hey, wait for us!" cried Paulie. Finny eventually caught up to her mate, and both dolphins then slowed to a casual pace in the inlet with the girls and Caretta in tow.

"So to which Continent are you returning to this summer, Miss Paulina Annabella Denardo, World Traveler? Asia, South America- Africa, perhaps?"

"Dad's needed at New York headquarters, so you've got me all summer instead of a few weeks, mi mejor amiga." Paulie's father is a big wig in UNICEF, and took his daughter with him on his travels ever since she was small. She can hold her own conversing in several languages.

"I'm taking your but-tocks with me everywhere when we're grown, my translator BFF."

"Drop us off at the beach now, guys," said Katie. Finny and Flopman instantly pointed towards shore. "Let's pick up where we left off with the shell collecting. I'm tired of Mrs. Ziffleman winning; let's bring home the "Folly Beach Sea Shell Collector of the Year" trophy this summer. What do you say?"

"I say, let's hope our summer will have more excitement in it than just beating Old Lady Ziffleman. I want to have an adventure! Can't we just have one cool summer?"

"I don't think there's too much adventure to find here on quiet Folly Beach, but we could still have fun. Join me in the summer reading program at the library. We can do some follow-up research on the Atlantis myth that we studied in World History.

"Oh, come on Katie. We just got out of school and you want to stick your head in books again? I want us to do something fun."

As Katie and Paulie hunted for shells and argued about their summer plans, halfway around the world is a boy standing at the bow of one of his father's small fishing boats tossing his net off the coast of Gozo, a small fishing village in Rabat, Morocco.

"عالق في الشباك. لقد حصلت على تقفز فيها." Adisa realized that his net is snagged on something below the surface. He kicked off his sandals and dove into the sea.

While detaching the net from rough coral, Adisa saw something red and glimmering near his net. He grabbed the object and swam back up.

He looked at his watch as he climbed on the boat. "كان ثلاث دقائق تحت الماء، وهذا رقماً قياسياً عالمياً جديداً بالنسبة لي!" Adisa had held his breath for three minutes; it was a new record for him.

As he sat on the deck holding the rounded red chunk, warm in his hand, Adisa thought هذه الصخرة هو خاص بطريقة أو بأخرى.. He became fascinated when the rock he just thought was special, started pulsating in his hand.

As Katie and Paulie searched for shells, and Adisa sits mesmerized by his peculiar red rock, a girl in Bolivia is digging for relics for her father's tourist business.

Pilar unearths a peculiar smooth and shiny black rock from the ground near the ancient ruins of Tiwanaku. "¡Ah, qué roca tan hermosa, negra, y brillante! Mamá me enseñó que el negro obsidiana ofrece protección y es poderoso en ponerse en contacto con los espíritus." Her mother had taught her that black obsidian rock offers protection and is powerful in contacting spirits.

"Papá no será capaz de vender una roca simple. ¡Lo guardo para mí!" She's keeping the glassy rock for herself and knows that her father would laugh at her if she presented a rock as a relic anyway.

"Qué es eso?" Pilar's eyes bulge when her brilliant black rock begins to glow in her hand.

Back at Folly Beach, feeling the waves rush in then ease out over her toes, Katie lifted her shell strainer and jiggled it around until all that remained were bulkier occupants of the sea.

"Throw it back, Katie; it's just a bunch of rocks," said Paulie.

As Katie was about to toss the contents into the water, something caught her eye. "Hey, take a look at this," she said waving Paulie closer.

She held a bright white rock, no bigger than an inch, whose rounded edges Katie naturally surmised had been worn down from centuries of the ebb and flow of the sea.

"This is interesting; it looks like a carving of an ancient structure, like something I've seen in a book somewhere," Katie said, as she zeroed in to notice several huge columns that stood at what seemed to be the entrance of a grand edifice. "It's like something waits inside, but it's all shadowy," she said as she tried to peer deeper.

Katie looked up at Paulie and said, "This is no ordinary rock."

Just then, Paulie exclaimed, "OMG, Katie, the rock is glowing!"

Little did the girls know, at the very same time Katie discovered her peculiar rock, way across the world, a boy in Africa and a girl in South America made similar puzzling finds.

The teens all gasped simultaneously as their stones glowed in their hands.

"Look Paulie, I can see other kids holding glowing rocks too!" Katie exclaimed.

Katie, Paulie, Adisa and Pilar were about to embark on a mysterious adventure.


1st 5 Pages July Workshop - Ellie Rev 1

Name: Ellie
Genre: Young Adult Fantasy
Title: Northern

Liko took in a deep breath and slowly smoothed her way over the ceiling beam she was laying on. The wood was like silk under her fingertips, slippery enough to slide right off and fall two stories to the unfriendly marble floor below. Liko swallowed her fear and peeked over the side of the beam. If she was going to steal a mission, she wouldn’t let something as simple as a dangerous drop stop her.

Papers and pots of ink were strewn over the surface of the oak desk in the center of the room. A coffee press sat next to an oversized mug, still steaming. The smell encompassed the room; a nutty, chocolaty aroma, with a hint of hazelnut. The Imperio lived off that stuff.

There were three doors in Imperio Catherine’s briefing room, the main door, the one strictly for the Imperio's guards and a side exit only for the Imperio herself. The building was a huge mansion made of marble with heavy oak doors carved with locking runes. Only the moon goddesses knew why Imperio Catherine chose to have beads hanging in her doorways instead of rune locking oak. The beads clinked together; sending small tunes throughout the room that made Liko’s skin shiver.

Three figures stood below Liko; Catherine, and the two boys she was briefing.

Catherin was standing in front of her desk. All Liko could see of her was her black short hair and her silk robes billowing around her. Nayeeshi stood stone straight in front of Catherine; the only thing that ruined his perfectly ironed appearance was the mop of black hair he refused to let anyone touch. Tarin stood next to him, a striking contrast to Nayeeshi. He made looking like he rolled out of bed a form of art. His orangey hair was mussed up, and his uniform jacket was unzipped.

“Nayeeshi, you’ll be going alone on this mission.” Catherine said.

Liko’s eyes shot to Tarin as he stepped forward. “Alone? But we’re-“

Catherine waved him off with a delicate hand. “Tarin. I know you two are attached at the hip, but you need to cut the cord and train the new recruits.”

Liko held back a laugh at Nayeeshi and Tarin’s indignant look. Perfect. She thought. It would be much easier to steal a solo mission. Less danger and less of a chance of getting caught.

It wasn’t anything against them. She was grateful that Nayeeshi and Tarin took the time to train her on their own. But she wanted more than just a backyard training session. She wanted to be a part of the village’s training class, learning to fight and protect the village if the Regia and their Hunter dogs finally broke through their barriers. The only thing stopping her was Imperio Catherine; she thought Liko was better suited for scholarly scriptures and memorizing ledgers.

Catherine pushed some papers around her desk, almost knocking over a quill holder before pulling out a small parchment. She brushed it off with the back of her hand, revealing an inked map with a red marking. “You’re to retrieve a gem that’s been hidden in a cavern to the North.” Catherine’s voice was soft and low. Liko leaned farther over the beam to hear. “It’s in Hunter territory, but supposedly unguarded. The cavern isn’t very deep so it won’t be difficult to navigate.”

Liko squinted down at the map. After she was certain she got a good look, she closed her eyes and recalled the image. She looked back at the map to double check her memory and smiled when it was perfect.

“Why do we need this gem anyway?” Tarin asked, scrutinizing the map.

Catherine released a heavy sigh. “Honestly, Tarin, you have no patience.” She handed the map to Nayeeshi. “It’s one of a pair that is originally ours, but was taken. We’re just getting them back.”

“I’m guessing this information is from our ace informant?” Nayeeshi asked in his usual monotone voice. When Catherine nodded, both the boys instantly seemed more interesting.

Liko rolled her eyes. They acted like being a spy in the Hunter’s city was a gift from the moon goddesses or something. Spying wasn’t hard. She was doing it right now.

Seeing that the briefing was close to its end, Liko shimmied her way backwards on the beam. When she got to the end, she pulled herself up onto the beam above her and crawled through the open vent leading to the back of the building's second floor. She’d found this crevice when she was eleven and Catherine told her she wasn’t ready to be trained. Liko had snuck into her office to find out who she thought was ready.

Making sure there was no one around, Liko let herself drop and roll into the courtyard. Her stomach was like river rapids breaking, her fingers flicked. She was doing this; she was taking Nayeeshi’s mission. Her body thrummed with the thought.

She doubled checked her pockets and pouches to make sure she was prepared, then felt her shirt for her whistle; the most important thing. Without her whistle-key, she’d never be able to get back into the city. It was engraved with runes that allowed her to go through the barrier that protected them. “This will be a good day.”

“And why is that?”

Liko squeaked and spun. “Tarin,” she breathed. “By the moons, you scared the life out of me!”

Tarin chuckled, his green eyes glimmering. He was leaning against the side of the building. “Guilty about something?”

Liko frowned and crossed her arms. “Shouldn’t you be off with Nayeeshi or something?” Wasn’t he just inside? If he’s out, that means Nayeeshi should be out as well. Liko shifted form one foot to the other.

His face fell and he looked her over before shrugging, pulling his expression up to normal. “He’s getting more information.” He moved off the wall with languid grace Liko couldn’t help but admire, his hair falling over his forehead.

“Got a mission without you?” The thought of Catherine needing to give Nayeeshi more information made Liko’s fingers flick. What more could he need to know about retrieving a simple rock?

Tarin narrowed his eyes. “Sneaking around where you’re not supposed to be, huh?”

Caught. She should have known better. Nayeeshi probably noticed her too. Tarin always seemed to know her better than she knew herself sometimes. The thought made her cheeks heat up. Instead of admitting anything, Liko just shrugged.

“You know sneaking around during briefings won’t take your mind off it.” He placed a hand on her head and her stomach flipped. His hand was warm; his fingers long and elegant, and those eyes-

Liko scrunched up her face and pushed his hand away. “I know that.” She hadn’t snuck in just to eavesdrop. She was just about to make an excuse to leave, when she say his face. Looking at the Imperio’s building like it was a ship sailing off with his love. “You worried about Nayeeshi?”

Tarin blinked, taken back. “’Course not. He can take care of himself.”

“I know.” Liko said, seeing Tarin’s shoulders relax a bit. “He’ll be back before dinner time.”

Tarin’s lip twitched up on one side, forming a dimple. He scratched at the beauty mark under his left eye. “How about I give you a training session later? We could work on your hand to hand combat first, and you still need to work on getting out of holds.”

“I’m glad I have so many things I need to work on.” Liko didn’t bother trying to hide the sarcasm in her tone. He was too distracting. She needed as much of a head start on Nayeeshi as possible. Her fingers twitched again.

“If you were too good, I wouldn’t have an excuse to spend time with you.”

Liko turned her face away so he couldn’t see her blush. He knew exactly what to say to make her heart go on a rampage in her guts. But now was not the time for this.

“After I train the novices, we can meet up in the training hall. Sound good?”

Liko managed to force a smile. She had to get rid of him before Nayeeshi finished his briefing. “Sounds good.”

He smiled back. “Alright.” He mussed up her hair and winked before turning towards the training grounds. “See you later, princess.” He gave a wave before shoving his hands in his pockets and walking away.

1st 5 Pages July Workshop - Frye Rev 1

Name: Cassie Frye
Genre: YA Contemporary/Paranormal Twists
Title: Fade

The girl in the bathroom mirror is not me.

I swallow the knot in my throat, and run a shaking hand through my hair—hair that is now thick, brown, and curly. I used to be a blond, I used to be taller, and I used to be thinner. Now, this strange girl looks back at me, with hair that feels fake; like hair on a doll.

There’s a knock, and my head jerks toward the noise. Whoever it is, probably heard my scream moments ago. It's the most natural reaction when you wake up in someone else's body. “Meredith, is everything okay?” The female voice asks.

My name is not Meredith—it’s Hana—and I’m almost about to correct the woman, but hold my tongue. Better not to arouse suspicion. No one would believe my story anyway. They’d sooner think I was crazy, and if there’s one thing I know, it’s that I am perfectly sane. So I take in a sharp breath, to keep from losing it.

“Yeah,” I croak, before returning to my reflection.

What happened last night? I know I went to a party, but I don’t remember much of it. Did I get drunk? It seems unlikely, given the pajamas I’m wearing. Plus, I’ve always been cautious. A partier, yes, but never reckless. In fact, I was the designated driver last night, sworn off booze so that my friends and I could get home in one piece.

I scowl, and watch as the stranger in front of me wrinkles her nose as well. No matter how long I stare at that damned mirror, my reflection doesn’t change. I can’t believe what I’m seeing. Then I remind myself that this bathroom is unfamiliar, with its pastel colors and old, worn towels; and the woman’s voice is unfamiliar. She called me Meredith.

I have no idea how I got here, or who the heck Meredith is, which is probably why I’m still shaking. I can’t help myself. I feel a pressure rise in my chest, and proceed to let my legs drop by the toilet. Vomit comes up, as hurling noises fill the room.

“Honey, are you sick?” The woman asks. I dry heave a few times, before I can catch my breath. When I feel like the nausea spell is over, I wipe my lips and flush the toilet.

“I—I’m fine.”

Perhaps this is a dream. I force my breathing to slow at the thought. Dreams had a tendency to feel real. They also had a tendency to be a bit on the weird side. This has to be a dream. Pretty soon, I’ll wake up, imagine having to live the rest of my life in a different body, and laugh.

A collection of tears blurs my vision. This can’t be happening. I’m imagining things.

“Maybe you should get some rest," the woman suggests.

Who is this woman, anyway? “Just leave me alone!” I snap. There's a silence that follows, and I begin listening to my breath. In and Out.

Then the woman bangs hard on the door. “Meredith, open this door!”

I need to get rid of the woman, so I try not to freak out. I try not to yell, when I turn the lock and open the door. The woman before me looks a lot like the girl in the mirror, except older. Meredith’s mother, perhaps? No wonder she’s concerned. “Please,” I tell her. “I’m fine. I just need a moment. I’ll be down in a sec.”

“Should I call the doctor?”

A doctor is the last person I want to see. “I’m fine.” How many times do I have to say it? Probably until I believe it.

"I'll get you some water, then. " She heads down the stairs without waiting for an answer. Then I close the door, lightly, even though I want to slam it.

I take the silence as an opportunity to recollect my thoughts.

One: I am not in my body.

Two: This is not my home.

Three: I need to find out what happened last night.

My stomach gives little twisty jolts. This is crazy. A part of me refuses to accept the first two facts, but the evidence surrounds me. Something isn’t right, and I need answers. I turn on the water; the sound of running water is soothing. Then I gather the liquid in my cupped hands, and splash it on my face. My arms feel heavier, I think, and I notice my fingers are a bit shorter as the water rushes over them. Nails are bitten to the stub. I shudder. A nail bitter.

When I look at the mirror for a third time, I can’t help but pray that I’m mistaken, but the same brown-haired girl is looking back. No illusion.

And then I see it. I’m seeing double, another Meredith standing right beside me in the mirror. I blink, and look to my left, where she supposedly stands. No one. Maybe I’m seeing things.

“Hello, Hana."

My name. My real name. The voice comes from my right, and when I turn, she's there. Meredith. But I’m Meredith. Or at least, I’m in her body. I cast a wary glance at the mirror, to find both of us standing side by side. We’re identical, save for the pajamas I’m wearing and the yellow shirt and faded jeans she’s wearing. I blink, four times, hoping she’ll disappear.

She doesn’t.

I open my eyes to find Meredith standing there, her hand rubbing against her left arm and lips pulled tight. It’s then that I notice she’s an exact image of Meredith, but not…fully formed. As if she’s a projection of light. As if she’s a ghost.

My heart pounds as I take a few steps back, almost falling into the tub. In shock, I blurt out the first words that come to mind. “What’s going on?!”

Meredith, though, just stares. She walks, or more accurately, floats around me, as if she’s inspecting me. I feel chill bumps rise on my arms, but I’m too frozen in shock to rub them down. When she doesn’t answer, I’m barely able to ask how she knows my name. Obviously, if she knows my name, she knows what happened. And more importantly, she can tell me how to get out of this body.

“I suppose you know what happened. You’re in my body now, and I’m…” Meredith moves her hands, up and down her body, “well, you get the picture.”

“Obviously,” I snap. I want her to get to the point.

“And I know your name, because I switched bodies with you. Have you already forgotten?" There’s a pause, and her lips move, like she’s about to say something else, but no words come. With a frustrated moan, she turns.

“HEY!”

She keeps floating away, so I take a few quick strides and reach out to grab her arm. My hand passes right through her, like she’s made of air.

“Tell me how we switch back,” I hiss.

That gets her attention, and Meredith turns to face me. Her lips are pulled tight again, her fists clenching and unclenching. There’s a moment of hesitation, before she lets out a shaky breath. I get the feeling that she’s not happy about the situation. There's a sad look on her face. It's the kind of face one makes when giving bad news.

“I don’t think you want to switch back,” she tells me.

“Why?” I ask.

“Because you’re dead.”

1st 5 Pages July Workshop - Miriam Rev 1

Name: Miriam
Genre: YA Fantasy
Title: Nightfallen


The men in the clearing look lost, far away from home knowing they will never go back. The light filters through the trees casting green shadows on the ground. It should smell clean out in the middle of nowhere, but instead there is an overwhelming stench of decay. The infected are gathered in a loose circle getting ready to set up camp.

My father leads our team of fighters, signaling men to move around the clearing. They are silent as they tread carefully into place. We should be able to stop any of the infected from escaping as long as the men hold the perimeter.

I step next to him. With his hand on my shoulder, he leans in next to my ear. “Lexy, there are twelve in the clearing. They may have reinforcements.”

I nod and grab my katana in one hand, my knife in another. I peer through the trees assessing the situation. My first rush of adrenaline shows my anticipation for the next few minutes. A group is gathered around a small fire. The infected look tired. A few have the gray bubbles spreading up along their faces. They shouldn’t be able to fight back as quickly as the others. I watch as each man from our group steps into place, blocking any escape path.

At my dad’s signal, I step into the clearing alone. I walk until the talking stops and everyone in the group is staring at me. Twelve sets of eyes, and still no one moves. I wait expectant. I’m ready for this.

“Are you lost?” one of the infected asks. His voice is rough. He doesn’t have any gray bubbles that I can see, but there is a nasty looking bite mark on his arm, with dark streaks of red running up it.

“No.” His concern surprises me. I’m not used to anyone worrying about my safety. I hold my hands steady, shifting my weight slightly as I take in the clearing around me, looking for holes in the ground or things I might trip on. It’s all I can do to hold myself back from the attack.

“You should probably go then,” he says. “I can’t guarantee that they’ll leave you alone.” He waves his arm around him, and the other people in the group just look at me. Most of them settle back down on the log and ignore me. But one of the younger men stands up. He grabs a knife next to him, and rushes toward me. Finally, we can begin.

I bring my sword up to block his downward swing. His blade bounces off my sword, but his other arm grabs my wrist. I move back, and away from him. For the first time in a long time, I stumble. I forget about the men in the clearing around me backing me up. All I can feel is his iron grip on my wrist. All I can hear is the heavy sound of his breath, and all I can see are his cold blue eyes as he comes towards me.

I twist away from him, pulling back as he swings his knife again.

One of the younger men from my father’s group crashes into the clearing. The sound momentarily distracts me from the infected in front of me. No one moves to help him as four of the infected stand up and begin converging on him. Four against one is not a fair fight.

The infected grabs me again, and I manage to pull back and down so he misses my throat, but the tip of the knife still slices across my cheek. It happens so fast that at first it doesn’t feel like anything. Then the stinging starts.

The pain snaps me out of my daze. I thrust myself forward, swinging my sword wide. I can’t reach his neck, so I settle for a sharp jab forward. As I pull my sword out of his stomach, he leans forward clutching his middle, and I move quickly slicing off his head.

The sound of my blood rushing through my ears fades, and around me I hear the shouts of the men, and the sounds of guns rushing forward. The man who stumbled in the clearing is close to being overwhelmed. He is carrying a pump action shotgun and no knives or sword. Although he has blasted away one of the infected, his next shot goes wide. The other three are too close, and one grabs him before he has time to reload and fire again.

He screams, high pitched and wild as he writhes trying to break free, and avoid being bitten.

I pull my knife out of the sheath on my thigh and swing it forward, hitting the infected who has him just below the base of the skull. The infected drops, and the man keeps screaming. As far as I can tell, he doesn’t have any injuries. Two more shots go off while I reach for my other knife and the two infected near him drop to the ground.

Dennis rushes forward, grabbing me. He puts me in the truck and pulls out a compress soaked in alcohol and presses it to my check. My eye begins to water. The fear of infection makes my hands shake. The adrenaline should be leaving me now that the fight is over, but it is still zinging through me.

The rest of the men are in the clearing, cleaning up. After we kill the infected, we try to save their souls. Since their bodies were unclean from the disease, we burn them and my dad prays for them. The ceremony takes some time.
“We need to get you back to the infirmary and give you a booster shot,” Dennis says. “Emma’s not going to be happy about this.”

I just nod. The cut is starting to throb more, and tears burn my eyes. I blink them away making sure my dad doesn’t see me. Tears aren’t worth the anger he will direct at me if he sees them.
Over the sound of the men in the clearing, a wolf howls. Suddenly it is silent. Everyone is frozen, when the sound is repeated back on the other side of the clearing. The echoing sound pushes people forward. The men stop what they are doing and pick up their weapons.

My father runs towards us, then we hear a third howl. My father starts the truck and begins pulling away before the door slams. Men are still in the clearing scrambling into the other truck. Smoke is rising from the fire we set, but no one is stopping to put it out. I’m dizzy, and my stomach lurches along with the truck.

“Travis, how did they find us?” Dennis asks. He is still dabbing at my cheek.

“I don’t know.” My father accelerates, twisting the wheel sharply to avoid hitting a tree.

Above the sound of the truck engine we hear it again. The wolves are howling. I look over Dennis’s shoulder out the window; two wolves are keeping pace with the truck through the trees. It’s the first time I’ve seen a wolf. One runs up to next to the passenger’s door. His fur is pitch black, and as he runs beside us, he looks through the window. His green eyes are human, intelligent. My breath catches in my throat. I can’t break away from his gaze.

“These are the real wolves aren’t they?” Something pounds in the bed of the truck.

Monday, July 8, 2013

1st 5 Pages July Workshop - Sadd

Name: Donna L Sadd

Genre: Middle Grade Adventure/Fantasy

Title: OCEAN'S EDGE- The Mystical Underwater Adventures of Katie Stone

Katie Stone was a cute, slim girl with freckles on her face, green eyes and beautiful auburn hair cut just below her ears. Though her mother always asked her to let her hair grow long, Katie kept it short so it wouldn't get in her eyes while swimming or searching out sea shells, which were two of her very favorite things to do.


Growing up on the shore of Folly Beach, South Carolina had brought a love of the water, its creatures and its mysteries early to Katie. She spent every waking moment that she could down by the water's edge. Whether it be fishing off the pier, or right out her back door plopped in the sand with a good book and her golden Retriever Anemone by her side.


Along with a love of the sea, Katie loved reading. She especially loved reading anything about the ocean, and she knew a lot about it. She could tell you anything you wanted to know about Loggerhead Turtles and Bottlenose Dolphins because they were native to Folly Beach.


Her parents supported her volunteer efforts with the Folly Beach Turtle Watch Program, where caring folks would help protect the eggs that the loggerheads laid before they returned to the sea and they would accompany her on weekend nights to stand watch over the future baby turtles.


Folly’s Loggerheads loyally return to the nest where they hatched years earlier. Mother turtles venture on to the beach on summer nights, dig holes around the high-tide line and lay their eggs before returning to the ocean. The buried eggs hatch 45 to 65 days later, and hatchlings have to make their way down the beach and out to the Gulf Stream, 30 miles off shore. Only 1 in 1,000 hatchlings survives to adulthood. Predators, pollution, boats, and people are all serious threats to baby and adult turtles.


Katie is an avid friend and supporter of the turtles and diligently scours the beach to cover any holes left in the sand, usually by sandcastle builders, that baby hatchlings could fall into, which would prevent them from returning to the sea.


She loves her volunteer nights during Indian Summer when she gets to help guard the eggs. Everyone keeps their lights out on the shore so the hatchlings successfully run towards the light over the ocean. She appreciates the dark silence of the beach, but loves most the sounds of the sea hitting the shoreline while they wait for the eggs to hatch.


The only evidence that hatchlings will leave to show that they successfully made it to the sea is in leaving trails in the dark towards the ocean to be discovered by morning's light.


There's been many a night when Katie's parents had to carry her up to the house because she was lulled to sleep by the magnificent ebbs and flows of the ocean she loves.


The dolphins of Folly were no strangers to Katie either. They enjoyed feasting on the plentiful schools of redfish that swam the waters of Folly Beach so they could always be found. Katie spent hours and hours watching and playing with the dolphins and internally prided herself for being able to 'speak' with them.


Her parents didn't know it, but Katie swam with the dolphins too. The kid was a fish herself! Folks on Folly would tease her and say they rarely saw her dry.


She had a particular dolphin pair that she loved, Finny and Flopper. She named Finny because of her exceptionally large and thick dorsal fin. All Katie had to do was grab Finny's big fin and hang on for a fun ride that could last all afternoon. While riding her, Katie would day dream that Finny could pull a sailing ship if she wanted to because Finny was so strong and fast.


Flopper got his name because he had a wacky move where he would fly through the air, spin around and splash huge amounts of water like he was doing belly flops. When he wasn't flopping he would nuzzle Katie with his beak. Aside from his mate Finny, Katie was his special girl and he loved her.


Katie knew all about fish too. She could tell you what bait or lures to use to catch local redfish, trout, ladyfish or flounder, depending on whether you were fishing off the Edwin S. Taylor Folly Beach Fishing Pier or casting off the beach. She fished with her dad all the time, but they usually would release them back to the water unless mom wanted a catch for dinner. Neither Katie or her dad particularly cared for eating fish. Her father because he was allergic to them and Katie because she thought of fish as her friends.


She was the Ocean's girl through and through.


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PAULIE


Pauline "Paulie" Denardo was Katie Stone's best friend. They grew up together on the same ocean-side block of East Ashley Avenue.


She didn't much care for school and got distracted easily by daydreaming of world adventures. It didn't mean she wasn't smart though; she was just smart in a different way. Katie would help her with her studies and exams all the time and Paulie would always manage to squeak out decent grades despite the fact that she really wasn't very interested in books.


Sports was another story though; she loved competition and pushing her body to achieve amazing things. Paulie was on the swim and softball teams at her school, and kept herself strong.


She had short pitch black hair that lately she'd taken to gelling to get it to look all spikey. She wore black nail polish and sometimes black lipstick once she got out of the house. Her clothes were pretty outlandish and the kids in the school hallways would usually point at her and snicker to themselves. Paulie didn't let teasing bother her; she was confident in herself.


Katie didn't care about Paulie's appearance either and thought it was probably an attempt by Paulie just to get noticed.


Paulie's dad was senior staff at UNICEF, so he was away to countries all over the world more than he was home. Often he would take Paulie with him to far away countries to spend her summer vacations volunteering.


Paulie loved this time with her father visiting exotic places like South America, Africa and Asia to name a few. She developed the unique ability to pick up foreign languages very quickly, in a few days or a few hours sometimes. It was quite uncanny, yet this ability endeared her to people quite quickly as there was no barrier to communicating.


As Katie was always interested in learning something new, upon Paulie's returning home from some far off land, she would teach Katie the languages she learned. Paulie was pretty fluent, and Katie would be able to hold her own in simple conversations.


Though Katie and Paulie were quite different from each other, they had a bond that no one could break. They were grow-up friends and that's all there was to it.

1st 5 Pages July Workshop - Ellie

Name: Ellie
Genre: Young Adult Fantasy
Title: Northern

Taking in a deep breath, Liko crouched and slowly made her way towards the edge of the ceiling
beam before peaking over the side. She was over Imperio Catherine’s briefing room. Three figures stood below her; Catherine, explaining a task to her brother, Nayeeshi and Tarin, her brother’s friend.

There were three doors in the room, the main door, the one strictly for the Imperio's guards and a side exit only for the Imperio herself. The building was a huge mansion made of marble with heavy oak doors carved with locking runes. Only the moon goddesses knew why Imperio Catherine chose to have beads hanging in her doorways instead of rune locking oak. The beads made small tunes whenever they clinked together, making Liko’s nerves tense.

Maybe that was why she chose to have them. Liko mused.

The Imperio was standing in front of her desk. All Liko could see of her was her black short hair and her silk robes billowing around her. Papers and ink pots were strewn over the surface of the oak desk. A coffee press sat next to an oversized mug, still steaming. The smell encompassed the room; a nutty, chocolaty aroma, with a hint of hazelnut. The Imperio lived off the black liquid, and Liko had inherited the addiction.

Nayeeshi stood stone straight, the only thing that ruined his perfect appearance was the mop of black hair he refused to let anyone touch. Tarin on the other hand, made looking like he rolled out of bed a form of art. His orangey hair was mussed up, and his uniform jacket was unzipped.

“Nayeeshi, you’ll be going alone on this one.” Imperio Catherine said.

Liko’s eyes shot to Tarin as he stepped forward. “Alone? But we’re-“

Catherine waved him off with a delicate hand. “Tarin. I know you two are attached at the hip, but you need to cut the cord and train the new recruits.”

Liko held back a laugh at Nayeeshi and Tarin’s indignant look. Perfect. She thought. It would be much easier to steal a solo mission.

Catherine pulled a scroll out of her sleeve and held it out, revealing an inked map with a red marking, indicating where Nayeeshi needed to go. “This is where it is. The cavern isn’t very deep so it won’t be troublesome to navigate.”

Liko squinted down at the map. After she was certain she got a good long look, she closed her eyes and recalled the image. She looked back at the map to double check her memory and smiled when it was a perfect recall, as usual.

“You’re to retrieve a gem that’s been hidden in a cavern in the north. It’s in Hunter territory, but they haven’t had any guards to prevent suspicion.” Catherine’s voice was soft and low. She never had to raise her voice to get attention. Liko envied how just the Imperio’s presence consumed a room.

“I’m guessing this information is from our ace resource?” Nayeeshi asked in his monotone voice. Catherine nodded.

Their ace resource was a spy that infiltrated the Hunter’s base to be an undercover agent. No one but Catherine and the other Imperios knew his identity.

Having heard enough, Liko shimmied her way backwards on the beam. When she got to the end, she pulled herself up onto the beam above her and crawled through the open vent leading to the back of the building's second floor. Making sure there were no guards patrolling, she let herself drop and roll into the courtyard.

Butterflies fluttered in her stomach, a mixture of nervousness and rushing excitement sent tingles over her skin. She was doing this, she was taking Nayeeshi’s mission.

It wasn’t anything against him. She was grateful that Nayeeshi and Tarin took the time to train her on their own. But she wanted more than just a backyard training session and self-taught throwing techniques. She wanted to be a part of the village’s training class, learning to fight and protect the village if the Regia and their Hunter dogs finally broke through their barriers. The only thing stopping her was Imperio Catherine, who didn’t believe Liko was ready for training.

Liko stepped outside, blinking against the harsh light. Even with the sun at its highest, the Polaris star was still visible. It made Liko smile. The Polaris was her favorite, a constant reminder of the past and to be brave for the future.

She doubled checked her pockets and pouches to make sure she was prepared, then felt her shirt for her whistle; the most important thing. Without her whistle-key, she’d never be able to get back into the city. It was engraved with specific runes, allowing her to go through the barrier that protected them. It also called the volcuris; the huge flying creatures that would definitely catch too much attention on the outside. “This will be a good day.” She declared.

“And why is that?”

Liko squeaked and spun. “Tarin,” she breathed. “By the moons, you scared the life out of me!”

Tarin chuckled, his green eyes glimmering. He was leaning against the side of the building. “Guilty about something?”

Liko frowned and crossed her arms. “I don’t know what you’re talking about. Shouldn’t you be off with Nayeeshi or something?” His face fell, and Liko wondered if he just stormed out of Catherine’s briefing.

Tarin looked her over before shrugging, pulling his expression up to normal. “He has stuff to do.” He moved off the wall with languid grace Liko couldn’t help but admire, his hair falling over his forehead.

Seeing an opening, Liko smirked. “Got a mission without you, huh?”

Tarin narrowed his eyes. “Sneaking around where you’re not supposed to be, huh?”

Caught. She should have known better. Nayeeshi probably noticed her too. Tarin always seemed to know her better than she knew herself sometimes. The thought made her cheeks heat up. “You know it’s not fair. The Imperio promised my training forever ago.”

“Well sneaking around during briefings won’t take your mind off it.” He placed a hand on her head and her stomach flipped. His hand was warm; his fingers long and elegant, and those eyes-

Liko scrunched up her face and pushed his hand away. “I know that.” She hadn’t snuck in just to eavesdrop.

Tarin’s lip twitched up on one side, forming a dimple. He scratched at the beauty mark under his left eye. “How ‘bout I give you a training session later? We could work on your hand to hand combat first. You still suck at getting out of holds.”

“Gee, thanks. I’m glad I have so many things I need to work on.”

“If you were too good, I wouldn’t have an excuse to spend time with you.”

Liko blushed and turned her face away so he couldn’t see. He knew exactly what to say to make her heart go on a rampage in her guts.

He saved her from word vomiting all over his oversized jacket, by skipping over her turn in the conversation. “After I train the newbies, we can meet up in the training hall. Sound good?”

“Sounds good.” Liko managed with a forced smile, feeling guilty that she wouldn’t be there.

He smiled back, but it didn’t seem to reach his eyes, he had something else on his mind. “Good.”

“You worried about him?” Liko guessed. Tarin and Nayeeshi were practically inseparable since they were young; even before Tarin’s parents died and he moved into the main building.

1st 5 Pages July Workshop - Frye

Name: Cassie Frye
Genre: YA Contemporary/Paranormal Twists
Title: Fade

My name is not Meredith. That should have been the first clue.

“Meredith, time to get up,” my mother repeats. I imagine a hand firmly placed on her hip, her blue eyes staring me down. I moan, too tired to form any coherent response.

Then she yells, “I don’t have time for this!” and throws back the covers. My body shivers and moves into fetal position. Seriously? Taking away the covers is like the worst way to wake a person up. Maybe not, but I’m too tired to think of anything worse. With a loose arm, I try to reach for the lost blanket,. I feel nothing, and instead, find myself surrounded by a rush a light.

Yeah, it looks like I’m not going to get any more sleep. Mother is the ultimate alarm clock.

So I open my eyes, and my immediate thought is: This woman is not my mother.

Apparently, though, she doesn’t find my confused expression funny. “Looks like someone overslept,” she comments, brow raised. My eyes turn to the alarm clock. It’s 7:15 am. Since when does 7:15 count as oversleeping?

“It’s Saturday,” I mumble. At least I think it’s Saturday. And who is this woman? And why is she making me up at freaking 7:15? I look around, and my body jolts awake, as if it’s ingested a double shot of espresso. This isn’t my room. My mouth hangs open, as I inspect the mess before me. Clothes on the floor, most likely dirty, a bookshelf with books haphazardly placed, and papers sprawled across a nearby desk. Where am I?

“Meredith, are you okay?" I snap back into reality.

My name is Hana. Not Meredith. I try to piece together the events of last night—nothing. I spot an adjoining bathroom, and I rush towards it without a word, making sure to close the door behind me.

“What's going on, Meredith?” I would have corrected her this time, and demand she stop calling me ‘Meredith’, except the image before me leaves me breathless. I am no longer looking at a tall, slender 17-year-old, with blue eyes, and straight blond hair. That girl had confidence. That girl knew who she was and where she was headed. The girl before me is heavier, with frizzy brown hair and light brown eyes. Her skin is slightly tanned, with freckles splattered across her cheeks. Meredith.

For a few moments, I don’t believe what I’m seeing. But then I remind myself that this bathroom is unfamiliar, and the woman’s voice is unfamiliar. I have no idea when or how I got here, which scares me. I can’t help myself. I feel a pressure rise in my chest, and proceed to let my legs drop by the toilet. Without thought, vomit comes up and I hear the hurling noises fill the room.

“Honey, are you sick?” I dry heave a few times, before I can catch my breath. When I feel like the nausea spell is over, I wipe my lips and flush the toilet.

“I—I’m fine,” I breathe the lie. “Just a stomach bug.” But this is more than a simple stomach bug.

I can feel, and see, my body tremble. Perhaps this is a dream. My breathing slows at the thought. Dreams had a tendency to feel real. They also had a tendency to be a bit on the weird side. This has to be a dream. Pretty soon, I’ll wake up, image having to live the rest of my life in a different body, and laugh.

Only now I don’t feel like laughing. I feel a collection of tears brim and blur my vision. At least, this way, I can’t see my reflection properly and I can image it was just a fluke, a momentary lapse in sanity where my brain saw something that wasn’t true, something that wasn’t there. I then lift up a strand of hair and bring it in front of my face for inspection. It’s curly. And brown.

“Maybe you should get some rest," the woman suggests. That’s not a bad idea, I think. Especially after she woke me up at freaking 7:15.

“Yeah…maybe…” I'm too distracted to give her a better answer.

And then it hits me: if I’m here, where’s my body?

There’s a pause, a void that I fill by listening to my breath. In and Out, until the woman speaks again. Her voice is soft. Hesitant. “Okay, then. I’ll try and schedule an appointment with the doctor this afte—”

“NO!” I yell. “I mean, I—I don’t think it’ll be necessary.” The last thing I need is to be scrutinized by a know-it-all physician. How was I to explain that I'm not Meredith, and that this isn’t my body? I would probably be considered insane and carted off the to the nearest asylum for evaluation. And if there one thing I know, it’s that I’m quite sane (thank you very much).

Another pause, and honestly, I’m glad for the silence. The woman just says “okay”, and I hear her footsteps fade, grateful for a moment to recollect my thoughts.

One: I am not in my body.

Two: This is not my home.

Three: I need to find out what happened last night, and what happened to my body.

My stomach gives little twisty jolts. It’s crazy, I know. A part of me refuses to accept the first two facts, but how can I not when the evidence surrounds me? Something isn’t right. I need answers. I need to know what happened, and I need to know more about the life I so recently inhabited. I let out a breath and turn on the water. The sound of it running is soothing, before I gather the liquid in my cupped hands and splash it on my face. The water keeps running. I look up at the mirror once more, hoping to be mistaken, but the same brown-haired girl is looking back. No illusion. It feels strange, trapped in a body that isn’t mine.

And then I see it. I’m seeing double, another Meredith standing right beside me in the mirror. I blink, and look to my left, where she supposedly stands. No one. Maybe I’m seeing things.

“Hello, Hana."

My name. My real name. The voice comes from my right, and when I turn, she's there. Meredith. But I’m Meredith. Or at least, I’m in her body. I cast a wary glance at the mirror, to find both of us standing side by side. We’re identical, save for the pajamas I’m wearing and the yellow shirt and faded jeans she’s wearing. I blink, four times. A part of me is hoping she’ll disappear.

She doesn’t.

I open my eyes, and there she stands, her hand rubbing against her left arm and lips pulled tight. It’s then that I notice she’s an exact image of Meredith, but not…fully formed. As if she’s a projection of light. As if she’s a ghost.

In shock, I blurt out the first phrase that comes to mine. “Who are you?”

“Who am I?” She asks, offended. Yeah, it's not the smartest question I’ve ever asked, but don’t teachers tend to say there’s no such thing as a stupid question? I’m beginning to think that’s a lie.

1st 5 Pages July Workshop - Caldwell

Name: Miriam Caldwell
Genre: YA Fantasy
Title: Nightfallen

The men in the clearing look lost, far away from home knowing they will never go back. The light filters through the trees casting green shadows on the ground. It should smell clean out in the middle of nowhere, but instead there is an overwhelming stench of decay. My father stands in front of the group, signaling men to move around the clearing.

I step next to him. With his hand on my shoulder, he leans in next to my ear. “Lexy, there are twelve in the clearing. They may have reinforcements.”

I nod and grab my sword in one hand, my knife in another. I peer through the trees. A group is gathered around a small fire. The infected look tired. A few have the gray bubbles spreading up along their faces. They shouldn’t be able to fight back as quickly as the others. I watch as each man from our group steps into place, blocking any escape path.

At my dad’s signal, I step into the clearing alone. I walk until the talking stops and everyone in the group is staring at me. Twelve sets of eyes, and still no one moves. I wait expectant. I’m ready for this.

“Are you lost?” one of the infected asks. His voice is rough. He doesn’t have any gray bubbles that I can see, but there is a nasty looking bite mark on his arm, with dark streaks of red running up it.

“No.” I hold my hands steady, shifting my weight slightly as I take in the clearing around me, looking for holes in the ground or things I might trip on.

“You should probably go then,” he says. “I can’t guarantee that they’ll leave you alone.” He waves his arm around him, and the other people in the group just look at me. Most of them settle back down on the log and ignore me. But one of the younger men stands up. I’m surprised at how tall he is, a good foot taller than me. He grabs a knife next to him, and rushes toward me.

I bring my sword up to block his downward swing. His blade bounces off my sword, but his other arm grabs my wrist. I move back, and away from him. For the first time in a long time, I stumble. I forget about the men in the clearing around me backing me up. All I can feel is his iron grip on my wrist. All I can hear is the heavy sound of his breath, and all I can see are his cold blue eyes as he comes towards me.

I twist away from him, pulling back as he swings his knife again.
One of the younger men from my father’s group stumbles into the clearing. The sound momentarily distracts me from the infected in front of me. No one moves to help him as four of the infected stand up and begin converging on him. Four against one is not a fair fight.

The infected grabs me again, and I manage to pull back and down so he misses my throat, but the tip of the knife still slices across my cheek. It happens so fast that at first it doesn’t feel like anything. Then the stinging starts.

The pain snaps me out of my daze. I thrust myself forward, swinging my sword wide. I can’t reach his neck, so I settle for a sharp jab forward. As I pull my sword out of his stomach, he leans forward clutching his middle, and I move quickly slicing off his head.

The sound of the blood rushing through my head fades, and around me I hear the shouts of the men, and the sounds of guns rushing forward. The man who stumbled in the clearing is close to being overwhelmed. He is carrying a pump action shotgun and no knives or sword. Although he has blasted away one of the infected. His next shot goes wide. The other three are too close, and one grabs him before he has time to reload and fire again.

He screams, high pitched and wild as he writhes trying to break free, and avoid the infected mouth.

I pull my knife out of the sheath on my thigh and swing it forward, hitting the infected who has him just below the base of the skull. The infected drops, and the man keeps screaming. As far as I can tell, he doesn’t have any injuries. Two more shots go off while I reach for my other knife and the two infected near him drop to the ground.

Dennis rushes forward grabbing me. He puts me in the truck and pulls out a compress soaked in alcohol and presses it to my check. My eye begins to water.

The rest of the men are in the clearing, cleaning up. After we kill the infected, we try to save their souls. Since their bodies were unclean from the disease, we burn them and my dad prays for them.

“We need to get you back to the infirmary and give you a booster shot,” Dennis says. “Emma’s not going to be happy about this.”

I just nod. The cut is starting to throb more, and I want to start crying. My father would punish me if I did, so I blink against the pain.

Over the sound of the men in the clearing, I hear one wolf howl. Suddenly it is silent. Everyone is frozen, when the sound is repeated back on the other side of the clearing. The echoing sound pushes people forward. The men stop what they are doing and pick up their weapons.

My father runs towards us, then we hear a third howl. My father starts the truck and begins pulling away before the door slams. Men are still in the clearing scrambling into the other truck. Smoke is rising from the fire we set, but no one is stopping to put it out.

“Travis, how did they find us?” Dennis asks. He is still dabbing at my cheek.

“I don’t know.” My father accelerates, twisting the wheel sharply to avoid hitting a tree.

Above the sound of the truck engine we hear it again. The wolves are howling. I look over Dennis’s shoulder out the window, two wolves are keeping pace with the truck through the trees. It’s the first time I’ve seen a wolf. One runs up to next to the passenger’s door. His fur is pitch black, and as he runs beside us, he looks through the window. His green eyes are human, intelligent. My breath catches in my throat. I can’t break away from his gaze.

“These are the real wolves aren’t they?” Something pounds in the bed of the truck.

“An abomination!” my dad yells.

I turn to stare out the back window. A brindle wolf is scrambling among the guns strewn in the back of the truck bed. The wolf growls low and long.

“He’s in the truck,” I whisper.

My dad swerves hard to the right and then left but the wolf stays. I look out the window again and see the black wolf next to us. When I glance at the speedometer my dad is going forty miles an hour in attempt to outrun them. Then I hear another howl, I look ahead and there are another two wolves flanking the road. They begin running on either side of the truck as we pass them.